增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I adopted the baby dog from an animal shelter. I was impressed by its lovely appearance for the first time I saw it. I brought it home but decided to build a warm home for it. Due to my tight budget, I had to make a cage for it by me. First, I watched various video relevant to making cages. Then I reach the market to buy the materials. After that, I had the materials tying together with strings. About three hours later, the cage set up. I put the dog into the cage. It wagged its tail happy. Although the cage looked strange, I felt satisfying with what I had done.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many events that one can not forget them forever. My first exam at primary school is one of the most memorable event. I still remember how I spent a sleepless night.
Therefore, on the following day, I felt extremely tiring and forgot everything I had reviewed. During an exam, my mind went blank, so that I wanted to do was cheat. Thus, when the teacher was turning around, I decide to open my copybook. I was too frightened that my fingers were trembling. Suddenly, my teacher came next to me, put her hand gently on my shoulder and saying softly, “You forgot put away your copybook!” I was real ashamed that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not getting along good with your classmates in the new school. So I’d like to give you some advices. First, you should be confident and try to talk with other if possible. The most important thing to do is look at others while talked. Second, you should take part with more activities, such as doing some volunteer jobs because you’re free. Third, you’d better to try to share your interest with your classmates, that might be good for developing friendships. Remember, making new friends with others need time and efforts. So you must patient.
Yours,
Helen
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a dream that one day I could be the pianist. I dream of play a sweet piece of music for those who need music, bringing happiness for other. I love music and I love the feel of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the musical sounds, the beautiful but powerful sound a piano makes impresses me much. It’s clear I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice for two hours every day if time permitted and learn as many songs as I can. I will put down my heart into my dream and never give up. I am confidence that one day my dream will come true.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hi, I’m John Smith. Now I want tell you something about my after-work activity. I guess they’re not quite different from your. I’m interested in sports. I run about miles on everyday for good health. When I’m running, I always thought about all sorts of things. And at the end of a run, I’m sometimes surprising to find that I have managed to solve the problem what was on my mind. Next year, I’m going to ran a Marathon. It is a hardly and long race and I want to do it very much.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, an uninvited friend fell from a sky. We all came out, only to find a big bird struggling in our yard. Though it was a young bird, but it had a huge size. People gather to see the strange bird. To our surprising, no one could tell its name. The bird seemed angrily and attacked whoever tried to get close for it. In addition, it refused to eat any food giving to it. Fearing that it would die, we called the animal protection center. Soon some worker arrived. “It only eats fish. And it protected by law,” they said. They told us its name, what was difficult to remember.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Just as you have learned, most us have eyesight problems. This may mainly result from the fact which we are loaded with too much school work. So we spending a lot of time reading and writing. Other reason may be that we don’t use our eyes properly, like reading in bed or sitting long hours in the front of computers. For example. I am short-sighted, as many of us. I started to wear glass at the age of 12 as a result of 100 much online game playing. Then I realized what is wrong and then corrected it, paying more attention to eye care at the same time. As I cannot throw away my glasses, I have succeeded in preventing them from getting thick.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
September is the right time where we should plant carrots. Last year, we planted carrots in a same month. At that time, some people said that it was too early do that. However, facts speak louder than word. Experience tells me that the early we plant carrots, the better they grow. In a result, our carrots grew the best last year. So see us plant carrots this year, many people followed us and grew their carrots. Our planting time is no longer questioning, which shows the power of examples. Now health carrots have come out. As time goes on, and the carrots are growing better and better.
