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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.65 引用次数:63 题号:16406693
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Just as you have learned, most us have eyesight problems. This may mainly result from the fact which we are loaded with too much school work. So we spending a lot of time reading and writing. Other reason may be that we don’t use our eyes properly, like reading in bed or sitting long hours in the front of computers. For example. I am short-sighted, as many of us. I started to wear glass at the age of 12 as a result of 100 much online game playing. Then I realized what is wrong and then corrected it, paying more attention to eye care at the same time. As I cannot throw away my glasses, I have succeeded in preventing them from getting thick.

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