增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am applying a volunteer position for the games. Personally, I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects. Firstly, as a sports fan, my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position. Secondly, my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others, and thus offer timely help. Thirdly, my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit, but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.
I keep passion for sports, but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event. I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity. I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In China handwriting was regarded as not only a basic skill, and a form of valuable cultural treasure. However, with the rise of digital technology, more and more students choose to type on computers and smartphones instead of writing by a hand, which as a result lead, to their poor handwriting. So measures must be taken improve the present situation. First, there should be handwriting lessons, especial in elementary and middle schools. Besides, schools should hold various handwriting competition to encourage the students to practice our handwriting skills. What’s more, every student should become aware that it is still with vital importance to develop their handwriting because computers and smartphones can be convenient and time-saving.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a dream that one day I could be the pianist. I dream of play a sweet piece of music for those who need music, bringing happiness for other. I love music and I love the feel of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the musical sounds, the beautiful but powerful sound a piano makes impresses me much. It’s clear I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice for two hours every day if time permitted and learn as many songs as I can. I will put down my heart into my dream and never give up. I am confidence that one day my dream will come true.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
People are always asking me what I want to be when I grew up. My answers are difference from time to time — scientist, professor, political leader — so the theme remains the same. I want to be someone which makes a difference in the world. To be honest, I want change the way people think. Whatever I do it in life, I know there will have some people who disagree with my values. When this happens, I will think about what great people will do in your situation. That’s why I often spend time read books about the life stories of famous people. I do hope I can do as much as possibly for society.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was sunny next Saturday. I determined to buy two novels and some magazine. Because my mother was ill, so I had to go to a bookstore with my 3-year-old brother Tom. There were a lot of people in the bookstore. There I saw me friend Lisa. As we hadn’t seen each other for long time, we talk for a while. When I said goodbye to Lisa, I couldn’t find Tom at all. He got missed! I was too worried that I called his name again and again, but nobody answered. About fifteen minutes late, I found my brother in a toy shop near the bookstore. A shop assistant was played with him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of my hobbies are gardening in my spare time. Now it’s great pleasure for me to share the details about when I plant flowers. First, I prepare an empty container with holes making at the bottom. Then I mixed some soil and sand and put the mixture into the container. After dipping the cuttings into rooting powder, I put it in the soil mixture. It takes 4-6 week for the roots to form. And then they are final ready for being repotted or given as gifts. My understanding of plants is also growing by. I am grateful for these plants, from that I have benefited a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary was an operator in Los Angeles. One Thursday morning, she was surprising to get a call from a young child said “Mommy is ill, Mommy is ill” again and again. Mary hurried to find the address of the call. She called police. At no time, the policemen and doctors arrived at the house. They broke the door openly, and they couldn’t believe their eyes. The little child was very young that she could not walk! She was sitting besides her mother and holding her mother’s hands. Tears were run down from her face. The doctors gave the woman some medicine and soon she was came to life. Later, they said, “It is the first time I have seen a one-year-old children call 911.”
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线(\))划掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn't catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money in fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn't able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no choice but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!