增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandfather, a retired teacher, is in his early eighty. Though problems came along with age, he never gives up learning. That he enjoys most in his spare time is picking up a book to read it, with glasses on. Wherever he meets new words, he will look them up in a dictionary. His thirsty for knowledge has great influenced me and my brother. As a result, we have made up our minds study hard and both of us agreed with the dream of being teachers in the future. Now we’re looking forward to making it realize.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We got to the cafe an hour before Anna was scheduled arrive. Learning that they wanted to give Anna a birthday surprise, a friendly waiter was more than happier to be our partner. Some colourful balloon were found by him, for which we decorated the cafe. We had just done all the work while Anna came into sight. We greeted her with our smiles or the gift we had prepared before. Anna stood there, with tears filled her eyes. When I handed the gift to her, she was too excited that she couldn’t help screaming. “This is the best birthday surprise I have ever been received!” she cried, hugging me tightly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the vacation, I undertook the challenge of learn a new skill: bicycling. I begin with the basic skills of keeping balance and pedaling and gradual improved my command of controlling and navigating.
I enjoyed me and felt the excitement of smoothly moving on two wheels. Beside, conquering my fears and building my cycling abilities led to a sense of achievements.
In the fact, mastering the skill of cycling reminds me the importance of perseverance, bravery and independence. All the qualities are that we need in our future development. Every daily experience enrich my life and connects me with like-minded individuals.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What’s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day, he posted the message on a poster board and put it in the front yard. “To the person who stole my bike, you hurt my feeling. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!” When he left home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike is back with new brakes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Technology is everywhere, affecting almost every aspect of our life. So it is no doubt that technology had become an important part of our daily life. But it is actually a double-edged sword.
Taking the Internet for example. For one thing, the Internet makes our study more convenient, what definitely improves our learning efficiency. For another, it provides us with an excellent opportunity to broaden our horizon. However, it can sometimes do harm to our health, especially our eyes, unless we overuse it.
As a result, when it comes to technology, we should look it objectively and reasonable. We should make the full use of the Internet and meanwhile, protect yourselves from its potential harm.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Technology is everywhere, affecting almost every aspect of our life. So it is no doubt that technology had become an important part of our daily life. But it is actually a double-edged sword.
Taking the Internet for example. For one thing, the Internet makes our study more convenient, what definitely improves our leaning efficiency. For another, it provides us with an excellent opportunity to broaden our horizon. However, it can sometimes do harm to our health, especially our eyes, unless we overuse it.
As a result, when it comes to technology, we should look it objectively and reasonable. We should make the full use of the Internet and meanwhile, protect yourselves from its potential harm.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Dear Fred,
It is delighted to hear of your progress in Chinese learning. As is known, language barriers can lead to misunderstandings. So it’s great importance to break them by learning a new language if possible. Luckily, Chinese has become my favorite subject so far.
Chinese offer various dialects, often leading to many challenges than other foreign languages. However, your achievements must have resulted from hardwork and persistence. As for an advice, I strongly suggest talking to your Chinese friends, which can correct your mistakes and help you get familiar with Chinese idioms.
It’s easier said than done. While study Chinese, you will sure face many difficulties. Don’t hesitate to contact me for more help.
Kind regards,
Li Hua
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school was held a sports day that left a lasting impression on me. The event started an opening ceremony, where students from different classes gathered. I was thrilling to participate in the relay race. With our hearts beating or determination in our eyes, my teammates and I was well prepared for the race. As the race began, we ran with strength, hand off the relay stick from one teammate to another. The crowd burst into cheers while we crossed the finish line. The sports day organized by our school was a really test of the power of sports. Not only did it provided a platform for showcasing talents, but also promoted friendship and teamworks.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
There are many advantage for parents to give kids housework to do, though it can be easy done by themselves. Sometimes, it may takes parents plenty of time to explain to the kids what needs to get done, and guide them do it. However, what is known to all, doing different daily tasks are important for the children’s overall development. Parents should believe there is always a suitable task for his kids. Finding housework that the kids are able to do at the particular time. Then work it out a practical schedule and system fit to them.
