增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I once had a bad experience. One day several years ago, I went shop with my friends. As I entered a small shoe store, but I saw two women selecting shoes. Suddenly they raise their voice and began to talk loudly about how beautifully the shoes were and how low the price was. Just then an old couple walked onto the shop. The two women urged her to buy a pair. When the couple left a store with the shoes, I noticed the shop owner give the two women some cashes. He also promised offer them more unless more people bought his shoes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandpa was a firefighter for a long time. Besides controlling and put out fires, he saved people from burning buildings. He did a lot of another things, too. After the fire, he had to check and clean his tools so that they were always ready to the next fire. He also learned of new ways to put out fires and new things to help him did his job. Now, he has new job. He does not go into burning buildings anymore. Grandpa visits schools to share knowledges about fire safety. He showed students the burn marks on his old coat. He tells everyone how to prevent fires and how to do if there is a fire and how to be safely. My grandpa is a hero.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
From the work I did during the summer vacation, I understand that money was not easy to earn. I felt it a shame to wasting food. For the old generation we advocate saving money. Take my parents for an example, they save every cent they can. When they talk about traveling, they will hesitate and final give up because of money. However, I think reasonable consumption not only including the basic needs, also the amusement. Life is short. We should enjoy every moment and see different people and beautiful sceneries. Most people have the plan to save money, but if they take in a small part, life can be much happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(N) ，并在其: 下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As my third year of high school life has come, I felt a little stressful, because I want to enter a better college, and my scores worry me. I have made my mind to study harder. Firstly, I need to improving my weak subjects. I decide to go over the important knowledges and ask my classmates for help. My good friend Lily is very patient. With her help, I will make a great progress. Secondly, the exam papers hand out every time, I will scan my mistakes and make sure what to make them right. Finally, I will make fully use of my spare time. I believe the aim will make you stronger.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：删除多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，从11处起不计分
It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Xiamen, port city in Fujian Province. My favorite sport is swimming, so I make up my mind to swim in the sea one afternoon with my friend, Tom and Lisa.
It was my first time to swim in the sea, with the waves come one after another to the shore and making huge noises. Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit thrilling and even wanted to give up at first. And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water, my fear was gradually replaced by excitement. Finally, I joined in the swimmers. Now I still remember how wonderful I could swim in the sea that day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I always dreamed traveling on my own. But my parents worried about me all the time. They thought I might have trouble solve the problems I met. In order to comfort him ,I decided to travel with a friend and they agreed. It take me just two minutes to book two train ticket from my hometown to Nanjing, paying with Alipay. I also downloaded an app which was using to help me find the hotel easy. We spent several days in Nanjing and visited the number of old museums, that contained many beautiful paintings. Although this was the first time that I had left home, but I really had a good time.
