增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改 10处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I first started writing poems in high school, but it were not very good. I just write down words without thinking about their meanings. When I turned nineteen, I was pleasing to go to a poetry class at the university on every day. It helped me focus on that I wanted to achieve through writing. At the same time, my teacher invited me join a poetry club, where we would all recite our poems out and offer different opinion. This not only helped me become more confident in speak in front of audience, and I also gained a better understanding of pace. The biggest thing I learned was to take a deeply breath and not to rush it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jack, my best friend, is my classmate. Our friendship is like a stream of flowed water. We often help each another in our studies. I was once weakness in English. Only he always explained various English problems to me patient, With his help, my English got better, as which I was grateful to him. As for him, he found it difficult learn math at that time. So I spare no effort to help him with math problems. At last, he made a great progress in math. Now, we are learning painting. No matter what difficult the high school courses are, we’ll work hard to be admitting to the best art university.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was at the Bangalore airport waited for my plane to get home. I went to get a dinner at the restaurant in the airport. Although I was not very hungry, I knew I could eat a little. So I asked for some rice, vegetables and fish. I was beginning to eat then I saw two ladies seated at the table next to me. They were talking about anything and I knew that they were hungry and were waiting for food.
Because I asked for too much food for themselves, I wanted to ask them they wanted to share my food with me. They are so happy and agreed. One of the girl said that not many people would ask people to share their food. We began to talk happy at the table and shared our stories. I felt very happy to see them enjoying the food so much. They also gave to me some advice about travelling around Bangalore.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I sincerely invite you to join in our Lantern Festival party to be holding at 2:00 p.m. next Friday on the school playground. You may know that the Lantern Festival mark the end of Chinese Lunar New Year celebrate. On that day, there will be some traditional activities. Lantern made into different shapes will be on the display. As a tradition, we attach a riddle to each lantern, and whatever solves any riddle will be awarded a gift. We will also make but enjoy sweet Yuanxiao together. The most excited part is the dragon dance performance, in which students will be dressed dragon costumes and dance to the drums. Please let me know if he can come.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Nov 4th, we took a bus to Flower Planet and take part in some group activities. At noon, we began to make wontons (馄饨) together. After a while, the plate was filling with wontons of different sizes and styles that we had made. One of my classmate brought the wonton plate to a kitchen and began cooking. When she carried the plate back, we were so eager see the fruits of our labor that we all gathered around him and instantly felt hungry. We could hardly wait for to put the wontons into our mouths. I ate them in such a hurry which I couldn’t even taste anything, and I still ate with great delight.
It was real a meaningful trip.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Swimming has been my favourite sports since I was young. At that time, I was often took to a pool to practice swimming by my mother. Whenever I saw my mother to dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help follow her bravely. Gradually, I became interested in swimming. The reason that I like swimming is that I feel it fun to swim. Besides, I consider them a good way to reduce my stress. I feel extreme relaxed when I swim in the water. What’s more, I became stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming. In word, swimming is good for us. So, let’s swim together and stay health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was cleaning the storage room but saw my skateboard. I took it out and wiped away the dust. Unconscious, I put my foot on it and tried to get back that feeling I had for the first time I rode it. But since so much time had passed, it didn’t come easily. I was so disappointing that I couldn’t find a point of balance. I grew frustrated. It took me several years to learn how to skateboard, but it took so few years forget all of these skills.
I start with the basics and tried over and over again. As you concentrated on the board,I found it quite magically that all I was thinking was about how to skateboard well, instead of comparing my skills now and before. Hour later. I found that my ability had returned.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my first day of school when I am introduced to the concept of labor education. At the first, I didn’t understand what it was necessary for us to learn how to plant trees and fix things around the school. However, as I participated in these activities, I gradual appreciated the value of learning practical skills. Not only did it teach me the importance of team works and responsibility, but it also allowed me gain a sense of satisfaction. I am grateful with the opportunities that school labor education provided to me, but the lessons I learned will always stay with me. Overall, I believe that experience labor activities is beneficial for myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I planned to save money for a trip. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To my delight, I got. My first tasks was to clean the elephant’s house. Luckily, another girl who had begin working there two weeks before taught me how to do a job and that helped me a lot. Each weekend, I was sent to work with difference animals. What I liked best were feeding the giraffes. Tiring as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close to animals and I also earned a lot.
