假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Luck has always been my closest friends these past five years. As you already know, there are a lot of forest fires during the summer season. Many forests are bad burnt each year.
This hot summer, not far from our house, a forest caught that fire. It is in July and a heat wave had been going for three days. Luck rushed towards a forest. There was no long any hope at that moment to wait for Luck to come back. Later a fireman ran into my house and told me what my dog Luck succeeded in saving four cats where were caught in the fire. According to the fireman, Luck caught the cats, move them one by one into a safe place.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday evening, my friend and I went out to eat in the restaurant. While eat there, we happened to notice an elderly woman sitting alone. Before thinking about it for a while, I walked over to her and asked that if I could sit with her. She said yes and we began talking. Later I learned the woman has lost her husband and that that day would have been their 60 wedding anniversary. Hearing this, I asked her join me and my friend and she was exciting to do so. We shared a meal together and exchanged story. On our way back, I told my friend, “Always be kind to people. You never know what we are going through.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was cleaning the storage room but saw my skateboard. I took it out and wiped away the dust. Unconscious, I put my foot on it and tried to get back that feeling I had for the first time I rode it. But since so much time had passed, it didn’t come easily. I was so disappointing that I couldn’t find a point of balance. I grew frustrated. It took me several years to learn how to skateboard, but it took so few years forget all of these skills.
I start with the basics and tried over and over again. As you concentrated on the board,I found it quite magically that all I was thinking was about how to skateboard well, instead of comparing my skills now and before. Hour later. I found that my ability had returned.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A writer who won the Nobel Prize leads a very tough life at the age of 15. In order to look after his sicker mother, he had to earn his living by write articles for a newspaper. Therefore, his boss was very strict with him, that resulted in a fact that he was experienced in writing. For his delight, one of his books were given the title of The Best Seller in 2010, and got the world attention. As result, many people could not to help learning his positive spirit, and his success set a good example to them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something amazing last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavy but we had a very important relative to visit, who lived in a distant mountain village. They had to take risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, and we arrived safely. A family welcomed us warmly. We treated with a good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after say goodbye, we start to return home. Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and couldn’t move. Just now, my father saw two villager walking by. They offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, I saw the funny incident happening outside a grocery shop. Two little kids were playing together happy. One was very fat with a large stomach, which was eating junk food. The other kid reached out or felt his stomach, joking, “See how big your stomach it is, but you are still eating much!” I amused and looked at the other kid. I couldn’t help laugh out as he was much fatter with an even large stomach!
In your opinion, it is no good having too much junk food, which might be to blame on the fatness of children.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：吧多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The train left lately that night and arrived in Montreal at dawn the next morning. At the station, people everywhere was speaking French. There were signs and ads in the French, but some of them had English words in smaller letter. “We don’t leave until this evening,” said Liu Qian. “Let’s going downtown. Old Montreal is close the water.” They spend the afternoon in lovely shops but visiting artists in their workplaces beside the water. As they sat in a buffet restaurant looked over the broad St Lawrence River, a young man sat down with us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
With the homeworks finished last Saturday, I went to countryside to visit my uncle. At about 8, I set out and arrived at my uncle’s after an hour. Seeing me, he felt very exciting and welcomed me warmly. I handed him the fresh fruit and flowers bought in the supermarket but he gave me some snacks. Then we went to catch fish. It was not long since we caught a lot of fish. Have brought them home, my uncle cooked some for me. After lunch, I helped him bathing the dog and he praised me with a big smile in his face. When it was time for me to leave, my uncle gave me some gifts that I liked very much, and hugging me. It was an amazing day which I will never forget it forever.
Mrs. Jones was still clean the house when her husband came from work. She was wearing dirty old clothes, no stockings. His hair was untidy. Her husband looked at her face and said: “Is this that I come home to see after a hard day work?”
Mrs. Jones’s neighbour Mrs. Smith were there. When she heard Mr. Jones’s words, she quickly said good-bye and ran back home. Then she washed and comb her hair carefully, put on her best dress and waited her husband to come. When Mr. Smith see his wife and stopped, he shouted angry: “And where are you going this evening?”
