增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, my father wanted to make breakfast for we. He got all the things prepare in the kitchen. The recipe he chose looked easily, with a picture of a delicious breakfast. He followed the recipe and waited with patient. However, instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for, it was turned out to be a total mess. He try to fix it. To his disappointment, he didn’t success. As a result, we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal. There, we all had great time together, creating memories whose would last a lifetime.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary Daniel is a student in England. This year she had a very interested summer holiday. He traveled with fifteen others people to the Tuwenzori Mountains in Africa. They went there to help make a road through a forest among two big towns. “It was very difficult because of there was no water to drink and no shops that we could buy food,” said Mary. “It was also very cold and wetter in the mountains. It is one of the wettest place in the world. ” Mary stays in the mountains for six weeks. It was hard work, but she said it was best thing she had ever done. She is hoping to return next year to do some more woke there.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Monday I went to the store. There was an old woman, appeared to be in her 80s looking at peppers. I went to get it and she started complaining to me the price of goods were too high and that they didn’t look good etc. I had run into this situation before, which someone complains about something. Normally I would have just said something politely but walked away quickly. This time I stay and listened while nodding my head politely. Soon her angry over the high price of food turned into fond of memories of her past. When she was done talking she said, “Bless you!” It wasn’t what she said but how she said it that was so heartfelt and genuine. I just did a simply thing as to listening and thing brightened someone’s day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was decorated it with a lot of Christmas gift. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Both Jim and her parents singing and dancing happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每句中只有一处错误。
2.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
3.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
Tom is an American painters visiting Beijing. Yesterday he wanted go to the zoo to see the pandas,but he didn’t know how to get there. He stops Chinese lady in the street and asked her the way with English. But the lady couldn’t understand her. Tom looked worrying.He thought for a moment. Then he had an good idea.He took out a pen and a piece of paper. He drew a panda on the paper but handed the picture to the lady. The lady looked at the picture careful.She smiled and showed him the way to the zoo. Tom thanked for her for her help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school. Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom, but I found the teachers impatient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly class atmosphere. I decided to make the best it. I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday,I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains.He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one.I asked myself,“Is he selling this build a house?”My heart answered,“No,this is for satisfying his hungry tonight.”I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits.I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift,but his smile was awesome.I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment.I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On our way home yesterday, one of my close friends was feeling a bit low because of she had a really bad day. I tried many way to cheer her up, but anything worked. I was worried on her. Whenever we were nearly home, I found that the trees along the road was in beautiful fall colors and the sun was shining. So I point it out to her. See that, she started to get happy and enjoy the colors. She took pictures of the yellow leaves and was all smiles final. This was a good lesson showing that nature is always there comfort and encourage us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They often thought wrong for me to do some things without their permission and always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the things what have happened to me, there is one that I will never forget.
One Saturday, I invited Eric my house. Unfortunate, I was bitten by my dog. Then the wound started to bleed. After apply pressure to the area with a clean bandage, Eric cleaned my wound with soap and water under running water for at least 5 minute. Therefore, the wound didn’t stop bleeding after 10 minutes of direct pressure. At that urgent moment, he send me to the nearest hospital for further treatment. The doctor thought highly of my action.
I was so grateful to him. And from this unforgettable experience, I realized the important of first aid. So, to help myself out and save others, I have learned some knowledge about first aid after that.