Last Sunday, my family went for walk in a nearby park. We wanted to breathe the fresh air and having fun there. However, when gone out, we found it was cloudy and smoggy (烟雾弥漫的). Only a few people were walking quick on the streets wearing their masks. I was wondering what was the matter when my little brother begins to cough loudly. Suddenly I realized that it was air pollution. So we had to go back to home that day. Smoke from cars, buses, and factories make the air dirty, that is harmful to our health. I think they all should do some thing to keep the air clean.
I tried a new lifestyle. I gave up the Internet, but even didn’t watch TV. I thought I would feel very boring. However, I had very different day. I wrote two article that morning. In the past, I always want to write one, but I didn’t have time. While I was separated from the Net and TV, I could devote me to writing. I once read an article, that said that every morning the writer spent two hours write without the Net. At that time, I thought of she was too strict. After I tried the method myself, I found it real worthwhile.
After we moved to a newly country，my three-year-old daughter and I was often alone in our house. Although we lived in the countryside with no close neighbors，I needed to prepare for some possible emergencies. For example，I wanted make sure my daughter would be able to call 911 in case of that something happened to me. After instruct her，I decided to test her. I asked her，"Okay，what will you do if you found me on the floor and you couldn't wake me up？" I could see his little brain working. Then to my surprises，she said，"I would go into the kitchen and eat anything I want." What the naughty girl！
The day, May 16th, is my younger brother's birthday. That afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and buy a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Seating on the train, I thought my brother would be very happy when he saw a present.
At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I didn't hesitate for a moment, but then offered my seat to him. The old lady thanked me for a lot and sat down. I felt joyfully when seeing her smile. I will always ready to help others in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Inviting by my uncle living in another city,I couldn’t wait to pay visit to his family by train last summer. As I am about to climb up the stairs at the railway station,a lady had caught my attention. She was havinga hard time get her wheelchair up the stairs.I immediate went to help the lady, that gladly accepted my help. When I took her wheelchair up,a young man offered to help me carry my big heavy bag.I late went up to him and expressed my thank. He said with a cheerful smile in his face,“By serving others, we can spread love and kindness.”
It isn't hard for everyone to grow up into a responsible members of society.
I can well remember an accident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, what drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Lucky she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am pride of what I did.
As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
In a different evening of November two years ago, we had a big party to celebrate Thanksgiving Day in the Concert Hall in our school. Present at the party was all the students and teachers, apart from some of the school leaders. Working together on stage, the teachers and students gave a lot of wonderfully American performances. For an example, they cooperated with each other perform witty skits（滑稽短剧）as well as singing and dancing. To our surprises, they also played magic tricks. The performances were very amazing that we all had a good time that evening.
Therefore, happy time really flies. The moment finally comes when the party came to an end. We are looking forward to get together to perform again.
When we were played basketball yesterday, a quarrel about a ball happens between Li Lei and Li Ming. Thank to the classmates there, the quarrel stopped after it developed into a fight.
We had our P. E. lesson in the fourth period on yesterday morning. The teacher asked us to play basketball, so we ten students divided us into two teams. Li Lei and Li Ming were on same team. As Li Ming didn’t catch the ball that Li Lei passed on to him, Li Lei began to get annoying and made some cruel word. And then they began to quarrel with each other.
In my opinion, we shouldn’t quarrel with each other at all. We are friends and we should cherish our friendship so that we can live happy.
This morning, I was jogging in the park where I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clear, someone had left it there by an accident. I picked it up and checked the contents. Inside them, I found some money and a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worrying, I immediately tried the number. A man answers it in an anxious voice. Heard that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away. Ten minute later, the man arrived. After confirming (确认) he was the owner, I handed the wallet back him. With his thumb up, he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. Seeing the smile in his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.
I, together with my father, went to Zhangjiajie this summer vacation, where they paid a visit to Zhangjiajie National Forest Park. In 1982, it listed as the first national forest park of China, that covers an area of 48. 1 square kilometers. Zhangjiajie, lie in the northwest of Hunan Province, is one of the most important tourism city. What’s more, it was recognized for China’s excellent tourism city in 2000. We were deep impressed by the natural scenery there. Therefore, we had kept on taking photos. In my opinion, a journey was worthwhile, because we were tired.
