增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In a supermarket, I saw a foreigner, that was confused at the counter for some time. I went over and found that he can’t pay online for his souvenirs. I offered to help, but he showed me a payment screen on his phone. I taught him step by step, and soon, the bill paid. As he realized how convenience it could be, his puzzling expression changed into amazement. He thanked me with broken Chinese. He waved goodbye and disappeared into the crowd. I watched him to leave, feeling happy that I could help someone enjoy her stay in my country without worries.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Something interested, happened to my parents and me. I stayed up late on Saturday’s night, so the next morning I didn’t woke up until my father called me to get up and play the piano. With my eyes closing, I begged to sleep more. My father had no choices but to leave my bedroom. Soon, my mother came in but asked me to get up to play football. I immediate jumped out of my bed, dressed up myself and ran away with my football. I didn’t know what my father would feel when he returned my bedroom and found I had left.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We got to the cafe an hour before Anna was scheduled arrive. Learning that they wanted to give Anna a birthday surprise, a friendly waiter was more than happier to be our partner. Some colourful balloon were found by him, for which we decorated the cafe. We had just done all the work while Anna came into sight. We greeted her with our smiles or the gift we had prepared before. Anna stood there, with tears filled her eyes. When I handed the gift to her, she was too excited that she couldn’t help screaming. “This is the best birthday surprise I have ever been received!” she cried, hugging me tightly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What’s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day, he posted the message on a poster board and put it in the front yard. “To the person who stole my bike, you hurt my feeling. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!” When he left home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike is back with new brakes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was waiting at the train station with a friend when a man was asked to borrow my phone. He was in a hurry and seemed disappointedly. He then called his family or said he had spent all his cashes on a wrong ticket. The train station wouldn’t let him change it, what left him at a loss. We talked for a while and I ended up giving him $20 buy a new ticket.
My friend said he hoped the man was telling a truth. In my view, it’s common to be a little sceptical about how the man’s story was real. Anyway, offering him $20 to get himself out of trouble feeling like the right thing to do at that moment.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On my way to my office, I saw a man listening to music on his phones. He was standing by a pet store. He looked lose in thought as he listened to the soft music. I was looking into the distance as if watch old memories being projected onto the wall in front of him.
As I walked by, I looked back but smiled, saying, “Such the beautiful music!” Sudden everything changed. His face lit up with the biggest and happiest smile! He says, “Thank you!” We both smiled. There are so much kindness in a shared smile! I smiled all the way work!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, my father wanted to make breakfast for we. He got all the things prepare in the kitchen. The recipe he chose looked easily, with a picture of a delicious breakfast. He followed the recipe and waited with patient. However, instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for, it was turned out to be a total mess. He try to fix it. To his disappointment, he didn’t success. As a result, we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal. There, we all had great time together, creating memories whose would last a lifetime.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When visiting a village in Africa, a scientist suggested game to the local children. He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away. Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets. But when he said “Go”, instead of raced for it, the children ran to the basket hand on hand. Finally, they divided the sweets out equal. When asked why they did so, they say “Ubuntu”. It means nobody should share happiness with others. He was realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together. Generally, this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a very hot weather and my bike stopped running in the middle of the road. Therefore, I didn’t have tools on my bike to repair it. At that moment, an old man were passing by and asked me how happened. I told him that my bike is not starting. He replied, “I live nearby. I will fetch some tools, then we will try to fix it.” Five minutes late, he came back, gave me some tools and helped me repair them. At last, we fixed it successfully and felt very relaxing and calm. He also brought me a drink. He was so generous, and I thanked him for being so kindly.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This particular day starts at seven in the morning in Casablanca. My Friend Mike and I were going to visit a young African friend calling Ellie. Once the three of us worked together with on a volunteer project in Kenitra, an industrial city of Morocca. He had been expected us to arrive in Casablanca for a few days. When he had no telephone, he had written down his address or name. We were told to just show up — all his mother and sister were at home. Obvious, the address that had been written down was hard for foreigners like us understand. In the end, with the help of a policeman, we were leading to a house down a winding road.