增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Journalism has a good development future. Attracting by it, I’m writing to apply for a position as a journalist. First of all, I’m hard-working but ambitious, which, for sure, can definite help me to do a good job. In addition to, I have accumulated some relevant experience, which can not only broadens my vision but also improve my ability. That I want to stress at last is that I am skilled in photographing. So at your convenient I hope you can take a look at your personal resume. I would appreciate very much if you could take my application into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist who can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing anything. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for the first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I still remember my working experience in a restaurant last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a meal. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice that said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements and thought maybe I could had a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about get a part-time job in the restaurant during the summer vacation. They strong supported me. Determined to challenge me, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it but I was really pride of myself!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dr Yuan Longping is a agricultural pioneer in China.He graduates from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.Since then he has devoted himself to find ways to grow more rice.The rice farmers are now producing twice as larger harvests as before by using the kind of rice he bred.But he is not satisfied with his work.Although now he leads a rich life,but he still insists on his work to develop his rice.I think his work is real important to the world.Because of he hard work,the production of food been improved.Thanks for Yuan Longping’s research,we have more tools in the battle to rid the world of hungry.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I planned to save money for the trip last summer. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To me delight, I got it. My first task was to clean the elephants house. Luckily, another girl who had begun working there two weeks before taught me what to do the job and I could work much well. Each weekend, I sent to work with different animals. What I liked best was feeding the giraffes. Tired as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close to animals but I also learned a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Zhou Yang will never forgot his first assignment at the office of China Daily. At the first time Hu Xin, his new boss, sent him with a experienced reporter and a photographer to cover the story. Before went out to work, his boss told her to be curious and must have a “nose” for the story. In order to grasp the detailed facts Zhou Yang should listen the interviewee carefully. His boss also was advised him to prepare the next question depending on that the person said. His boss told that he can use a small recorder to get the facts straight, if permitting by the interviewee. Finally it can be used to judge if the interviewed person is lying or not.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been telling one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you are interesting in it, reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I planned to save money for a trip. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To my delight, I got it. My first tasks was to clean the elephant’s house. Luckily, another girl who had begin working there two weeks before taught me how to do a job and that helped me a lot. Each weekend, I was sent to work with difference animals. What I liked best were feeding the giraffes. Tiring as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close animals and I also earned a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am honor to make a speech to welcome you. It is great pleasure to have you to teach us. Now I would like to introduce our school to you. On the very middle of the school stands the teaching building there you will be working. Behind the teaching building has a large playground on the right sides. On the left is our dining hall. And you will have the chance to eat a lot of delicious or healthy Chinese food there. We sincere hope you’ll enjoy you stay here.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的同下划一横线,并在该同下面写上修改后的词
注意:
1. 每次错误以及修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A wonderful night was hold for literature fans last night, ending with Mark McCarthy win the top prize for his latest work Darkness Surrounds. McCarthy give the award to his father as he was the one whose always encouraged him to become a writer. “My work can be dark and hopeful,” he said.
He mentioned the writer Jules Verne as first author to capture his imagination as him a young man. He loved the characters and amazed stories, Verne wrote, in particular. He advised young writers to allow themselves to be creatively and different from others. Congratulation to Mr McCarthy on his well-deserved award.