增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Of all the instructive proverb, the one I like best is “Where there is a will, there is a way”, what has a special meaning for me. When I was a freshman in high school, I had great difficulty adapt to the teaching methods of my new teachers. During the very first term, I was such poor in my study that it seemed unlikely for me to catch on with my classmates. Luckily, every time I lost my heart, my English teacher would encourage me, always saying, “A little more effort, or you will make it.”
Thanks to his supportive words, I adjust my attitude and devoted much effort to study. A year later, I became a top student in my class. Since then, I have learned that nothing is impossible to willing heart. As long as we keep trying, we’ll definite succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Because of my strong interest in math, so I dream of becoming a mathematician. But every time I didn’t do well in the math exam, I felt really sad and would cry, which bothered us a lot. My math teacher suggested I tried to fix the problems instead of just crying, an useless approach. Therefore, I started by thinking logically and discussing questions with my teacher frequent. Then I found out my weak points when I needed more practice, and gradually improved myself. I made a habit to practise math out of school every day. Under the help of some online math apps, I’ve been more enthusiastic about the subjects. Now I’m fully motivating and that’s already half the battle.
With the weather become colder and colder, the leaves gradually fall off the trees. Everything seems to be lazily. As a consequence, some of us students are tend to stay in bed late. Some lost interest in their studies. Others even don’t finish their homeworks on time. These aren’t that we should do as senior 3 students. In order to live up to their parents’ expectations, we should do everything we can realize our dreams. Let’s collect our brave to overcome the difficulties. We are convincing that we can gain success in the final tests with our joint efforts.
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in junior high, I was study machine. But I was will to do so because I understood how vital study was. I gave out all my rest time including summer and winter vacation with all weekends, that was highly odd and extreme in other’s eyes. Those years our motherland was still advanced, giving the cruel fact that Chinese GDP only surpassed that those of Japan. I studied so hard like a maniac China’s first premier Zhou Enlai did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Hua and Wang Hai are students of Senior Three. They all work hard but have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentive and tries to catch everything the teachers say. She spends more time doing her homework. It is certain what she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day
However, Wang Hai had a different way of learning. He likes to stay up late at the night, so he often feels sleepy in class. Thus, he misses lots of key point and it usually spends him more time to finish his homework, that makes it difficult for him to concentrate what he is doing. I prefer Li Hua’s learning method.
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn’t know how to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you with some suggestions.
First of all, that is quite common for high school students to feel depressing sometimes. Which really matters is that you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to teachers for help. They will surely provide you with useful and practical advices. Besides, take an active part in sports or you’ll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also good way to relax yourself.
I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m one of your students in Class Six. Now I met many difficulties while studying English. First, it’s difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. Secondly, grammar is too complex that I find it is hard to understanding it. And my performance on reading and writing are not satisfying. Would you recommend me some effectively methods? Finally, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you slow down our teaching speed. I’m confident that I will achieve great progresses in the near future and my English will become more better with your help.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11 处起)不计分;
3. 每句最多两处错误。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life. Some use them in a good way when some others don’t. As far as I am concerned, more and more students now use computers help with their study. If we meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework, they always got help from the Internet. To spend their spare time, they look for more informations with the computers to have much more knowledge. At the same time, however, the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted with others on the Internet that they can not return to their study. They are really in dangerous. Computers can either do good and harm to us.
Best wishes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jack, my best friend, is my classmate. Our friendship is like a stream of flowed water. We often help each another in our studies. I was once weakness in English. Only he always explained various English problems to me patient, With his help, my English got better, as which I was grateful to him. As for him, he found it difficult learn math at that time. So I spare no effort to help him with math problems. At last, he made a great progress in math. Now, we are learning painting. No matter what difficult the high school courses are, we’ll work hard to be admitting to the best art university.
