增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Chinese high school student. I’m writing to apply to English literature major in your university.
There are three reason for my choice. To begin with, I developed a strong interest in English since my childhood. Losing in English literature, I find a sense of satisfaction. What’s more, it’s known that English literature indeed plays an increasing important role in our daily life. It not only enriches our mind but also establish cultural and emotional ties between them with foreigners. Last but not least, the major contributes to find a good job. This is why most employers favor those with a good understanding of English literature.
From where I stand, I have achieved good academic performance in all English literature exams. I make it a habit to read English literature every day. I believe that I am qualified for the application.
I would appreciate it that if you reply to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A few week ago, I joined an online study club. At first, I felt depressing. During online classes, some classmates were kept silent. Besides, we didn’t see each other face to face. But to our surprise, when I shared my genuine feelings, all the teachers and peers listened me carefully. Interestingly, the peer said whenever he talked to his classmates online, he imagined they were not real persons, and man-made robots. Everyone laughed and started to think about how we should do to give others more positively reaction online. Gradually, we all turned on the camera, actively participating in the discussion and even made funny jokes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, a inspirational meeting was held in our school. Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confusing about their studies. In my opinion, the meeting was a big success, but what it provided for us was quite valuable.
As for me, I had learnt a lot from the meeting. First, I have realized a positive attitude play an important role in our studies. No matter what problems we may be meet, we should always try our best find solutions with strong determination. Then, I have known many useful learning method and will apply that I’ve learnt to my study. Lastly, I have become much confident about myself than before. I strongly believe I can prove my ability through hard work.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We high school students often run into various problem in our learning. Everyone of us have his or her own way to deal with them. Now take a look at mine. While I come across a learning problem, I usual turn to some reference materials or web pages. For most cases, I can work it out myself or it also improves my ability to overcome obstacles. You see, I do not study alone all a time. If a problem is too far beyond my competence, I ask my classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes parents offer some useful advice. As a result, I have made many progress in my study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
I’m so delighted to receive your e-mail, say you’re going to study in Peking University next year. You expected me to give you some advices on what major you should pick.
Personally, I’d like to suggest you choose from Chinese literature as your major. On the one hand, you’re quite interesting in Chinese literature, and you have gained some basic knowledge of it. In the other hand, Chinese literature plays the important role in the history of world literature. And Chinese writer Mo Yan wins the 2012 Nobel Prize for Literature. It is no doubt that Chinese literature will have a growing influence across the world. Hopeful, my suggestion is great use to you. You’ll surely achieve a lot while studying in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, I had difficulty improve my math for a long time. But I didn't want to give up. I decided to try some way to solve the problem. First, I turned to my math teacher to help. He told me that practice made perfect. So I made use of time do math practice. And after practising more, I found the suitable way of learning math. Beside, I also paid more attention to which the teacher said in class. And now, I have been improved my math a lot. I would like to say that we should facing difficulties bravely and believe in yourself, and we will succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With educational resources publicly available, parents nowadays are becoming interesting in homeschooling. Some people support it when others do not.
I am strong against this practice. Homeschooling is not allowed in our country because it is compulsory for parents to send their children to schools for an all-round education. In addition to, one of the biggest drawbacks was a lack of interaction with others. The social experience at school are very important things to enable a child to fit in with the competitive society. However, homeschooled children may lose many chances to compete with their peers(同辈). What’s worse, learn outside a school environment can consume a lot of Mom’s or Dad’s time, that can be a big challenge for families to balance their budget.
In word, it is necessary that children should be sent to public or private schools for formal schooling.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It's a pleasure for me give a short speech here today. Recently I've found that some of my classmates study too lately into the night. Nor did they spare enough time for a rest during the day. No wonder they can fall asleep in class. Besides, some classmates seldom have a breakfast. Certainly, which will surely do harm to their healthy. In my opinion, having enough sleep and a proper diet are extremely important. We must learn to make wisely use of our time. Only in this way can we keep fit or study well. Do you agree with me? Thanks to listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I believe I will benefit a lot of from the overseas exchange experience. Firstly, not only will my speaking English be improved and also my communication skills will be developed. Besides, I can stayed with a local family to get a taste of living in a difference culture. I eager to learn about the culture of other countries, that can broaden my global outlook. Last but not less, it is a valuable experience to stepping out of my comfort zone and adapt to a new environment. There, I have to look after myself and he think this will encourage personal growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The stage of high school is such important to me that I focus a lot of energy on study. I'm interesting in math and English but I dislike biology. Yesterday, I had no sooner done my biology homework than when I got a headache. The more I studied, the heavy pressure I could feel. Therefore, I talked to my close friends, whom asked me to hang out for funs for one day. We watch a movie and then went shopping happily. And most exciting thing was to have a buffet. The moment of forgetting annoyance made them so comfortable. I need to find a balance among study and amusement.
