增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am delight to hear that you are interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM). I will introduce it for you.
As is known to all, TCM was an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history. Basing on the five elements (metal, wood, water, fire and earth), TCM have formed a unique theory of treating diseases. According to the theory of TCM, prevention and treatment are of same importance and more attention should be paid on food therapies. However, we should take exercises regularly to prevent diseases. What’s more, have a balanced diet is also significant for us to keep healthy.
If you want to know more about it, you can read the book which I sent it to you. I hope you will like it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I`m so sorry to hear that you have been suffering from sleepless for a long time. To help your recover soon, I'd like to advise you to turn to traditional Chinese medicine.
As is known to us all, traditional Chinese medicine is practical but effective when using to treat some diseases. Compared with the high cost of western medicine, it has a reasonable price, so you don't need to be worried your budget. Additional, unlike western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine has more side effects. In the consequence, if you agree, I'd like to recommend a doctor to you, which I'm sure will offer you an ideal treatment. Please don't hesitate to ask me for help whenever you think it's necessary. I hope you would have a speedy recovery soon.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I have been delighting that finally a summer camp will be organize during the last week of the summer vacation. The camp includes various course such as cooking, swimming and giving first aid. I plan to sign up the course of giving first aid.
I choose to attend the course due to the fact that first aid is greatly important to people. If a person gets injured and need urgent medical care before a doctor arrives, every second counts, in that case giving first aid can even help save life. Nowadays, more and more people have realized what important first aid is.
Besides, I plan to study the medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopeful, the course will help them learn more medical knowledge to deal with emergencies.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Liu Weihai is making good progress. Although his hand is weak, but he can now feel hot and cold. The operation was doing in Zhongshan Hospital andlasted for four hours. During the operation, Mr Liu had a new hand attached.
Liu Weihai is attacked by a wild animal three months ago while leading a group of tourists in the mountains, but lost his left hand. The members of Liu’s group quick took him to a nearest hospital. He was later flown to a hospital in Guanzhou for an operation.
Mr Liu’s doctor has worked out a safe treatment plan for him. It will be hard for Liu weihai, but it is expected which in the next few months his body will accept the hand as his own without any disability. During this period, various methods will be applied to help the patient’s hand get strong, according the doctor.
“I’m very grateful to his doctor. I feel hopeful that I’ll fully recovery the use of my hand in the near future,” said Mr Liu.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I noticed Jack coughing in our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There a doctor asked Jack if she had coughed for long time, Jack nodded his heads immediately. The doctor then wrote a prescription（处方）with instructions on what to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted to the medicine, he almost brought it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tasted bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to drink it unwilling. But when he recovered third days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The surgery takes place more than a month ago, but Ella Edwards still suffers from daily pain. This is stopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor say that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. In an addition, Miss Edwards says the surgery makes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions.
Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasn’t turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “I’m very anxious for it.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, the skin is a essential part of our body. We have three layers of skin acting as a barrier against disease. So if our skin gets burning, how can we give first aid treatment?
First of all, remove clothing using a pair of scissor if necessary. Second, it is best to place burns under gentle running water for about 10 minutes. Third, cover the burned area with a dry bandage won’t stick to the skin. Holding the bandage in place with tape. If burns are on arms or legs, keep it higher than the heart. If burns were on the face, the victim should to sit up. If the injuries are second or third degree burns, it is vital to get the victim to the doctor and hospital immediately.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Animal bites are like dog and cat bites are most common nowadays. It will cause signs and symptoms such as pain, swelling and bleeding, that bring the victim a lot of suffering. First aid (急救) can make difference before emergency (紧急的) medical help arrives. It can be used for animal bites that cause scratches (挠) on the skin but did not cause a serious reaction. You should do with follows. Firstly, wash the bite area immediate with soap and warm water for 5 minutes. If the bite is deep, place the wound under gently run water for 10 minutes. Then dry the wound with a dean towel. Secondly, if the wound is swollen (肿的), put ice covering in a towel for several minute. Thirdly, get medical care.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday morning, I heard a piece of news which my friend Li Lei was admitted to the hospital because of the car accident. The day before yesterday, Li Lei is going to a bookstore to buy a book. He was very carefully when he got to the crossroads. He crossed the street when the traffic light turned to green. However, if he just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared at his right-hand side and came directly towards him. The driver drove fast and it was too late to avoiding it. Li Lei was knocked by the car. She was carried to the hospital immediately and had a surgery. Last night, I visited him. He looked pale unless he was out of danger.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen while the telephone rang. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on phone, the fire alarm sounds. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, the two fire engines were outside my house. I was quite worrying. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
