增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday our school organized mountain climbing activity, whose purpose was to inspire us students to taking more outdoor exercise. Hundreds of students took part in it. Having gathered at the Xiangshan Park at 8：00, they set out for the top in high spirits. Along the way we enjoy the beautiful scenery, chatting with each other happy. If some people fell behind, others would come and lent them a hand, such as carrying their bags or making them feel encouraging. After about two and a half hour, we all reached the top, where we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited to us a lot. Not only did we get some exercise, and also we promoted the friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Most children don’t get fat easily though they eat a lot, because they play a lot—they sing, dance and running around all day. They don’t have a moment of rest until they go to asleep. In this way the body will burn up as many energy as possible. But to those boys and girls who takes in much fat and sugar with the form of cakes, potato chips and so on but don’t take enough exercise, things are differently. They meet with serious weight problems. Some are too fat not to feel happy. Many have bad teeth. We can sometime see them on TV—who may gather together to discuss with others the question how to lose weight. The answer that they need a diet of healthy food which should be rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went a rock climbing in a climbing gym. It had several walls covered with hand and toe holds of differently colors. I tied a rope to myself and my coach held one ending of the rope, guaranteeing his safety. There were many route on the climbing wall. I chose an easy one but reached the top quickly. And then I tried a harder one, what cost me more time and effort. Though my legs kept shaken after the climb, I was very content. I am eager to go here next time and I hope I will be qualified to take part outdoor climbing soon.
I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made a lot of friend and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With summer vacation around the corner, some students just can’t contain our excitement, because it is the best season to go swimming. Although swimming is a good kind of exercise that help us keep healthy, but it can also be very dangerous sometimes. Here is some advices for you. Firstly, you are not allowed swim alone in the river. It would be better to go with your parents. Next, you should do some warm-up exercises after getting into the water, that will reduce the risk of getting into trouble. Lastly, you’d better not swim for too long, or you will feel too tiring. Kept this in mind, you will have a safely holiday.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is benefit to our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases and also build up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the old and it’s easy to do without considering rule. Besides, walking can also help we lose weight. What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear which are comfortable in order that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to let us for breathe with difficulty but still be able to talk. Third, it’s quite important to walk with our arms move freely. Most important, we should do it every day.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I love playing sports. After class, I played various sports with my friends, such as basketball, volleyball and badminton. In my view, playing sports is physical, mental and social adventure. The physical benefits are probable the most obvious. Regardless of our fitness level, after we start playing sports, we’ll notice an increase on our overall fitness. Beside, playing sports also contribute to our mental health. A pat on the back or a high-five from a teammate can really boost their confidence and self-worth. Moreover, those participated in sports can learn how to work with others. There’s no shortage of reasons to find a sport to play with. Pick one and get moved!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My office was fill with fit, slim people. When my colleagues work out at the gym, I stayed in and read. Instead of reading adventure novel, I would go for science fiction. One day last month,my mum came into my room,advised me to play sports on Wi Fit (健身游戏名). Finally, I selected tennis-after all, my mum played it on my own Wi Fit. Twenty minuteslater, I was extreme tired. As I slowly regained my strength, I found that I wanted to play again, who surprised my mum! I’ve now had Wii Fit for three months, and I play at least five times a week. My friend Leo was so amazing that he almost fell the sofa when I told him I was playing games on Wii Fit. Now I’m more fitter and healthier.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone! It’s my great honor to talk with the benefits of Taichi, my favorite physical activities.
To begin with, Taichi helped stretch our muscles, improves our body’s range of movements and makes us to have a lower risk of diseases. What’s more, Taichi can help us get over negative feelings whatever we feel sad.
But as for me, a year of practising Taichi has positive effect on my everyday life. I sleep well at night and I am more energetic during the day. Besides, Taichi has taught us to relax my mind, enabling me to stay calmly in stressful situations. I am sure I’ll continue to practise Taichi but enjoy the benefits it has brought me.
That’s all, thank you!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I would like to talk about my favorite sport, running. I only take it up a few months ago thanks to my colleagues whom are professional runners. I spend more than two hours run every afternoon. There are several reasons why I am fond this sport. First, it is the pretty cheap and easy sport to try. All I need is a pair of running shoes. Second, this is a sport that can bring us some new friends. Third, since I started this sport I have hardly caught any more common health issue like fever, flu, or cold. What’s more, I can show higher productivity than before and work for longer hours without feeling tiring. All in all, I recommend that everyone tries this sport.
