增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they make short journeys.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Spring has come with all its beauty! Trees have turned green or flowers can be seeing everywhere. Last Friday, my friends and me went on a spring outing. It was such a great fun! We cycled along the streams and down the paths. It didn’t take us long to get the foot of the mountain, that we left our bikes. Then we begin hiking. As we reached the top of the mountain, we were shocking to see many plastic bottle and food bags here and there. All of us started to collect the rubbish and then took it down the mountain. We felt happily to have done our part for the environment.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am fond of wild animals, which existence makes our world lively and colorfully. However, many wild animals in nature are in the danger. It is believed that human beings mainly lead the terrible problem. Thanks to many governments’ and organizations’ efforts, much attention from the world are paid to the protection of wild animals. As a member of human beings, I am sure willing to protect the wildlife. So far, I had launched two activities to show the public the great achievements make in the protection of the wildlife. Many of my classmates have joined myself. I hope that more people can participate in the activity to advertise the importances and benefits of environment protection.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A city,whether big and small,should be clean. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life. As we know,a clean city,that disease may be reduced and people's health may be better,are good both to our mind and body. No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy. However,as more and more people moving into our city,it is not easy to keep our city clean. Beside,some factories will pour waste into the air,the river and onto the ground,making it is hard to keep our city clean. To make our city the better place to live in,we still have a lot to do.
Recently our class has had a discussion on if people should eat green food. Different students have different opinion about it.
Some students believe them should eat green food, since the environment isn't polluting in the process of production. Also, it is produced without harm chemicals, making it safe to eat. Therefore, other students think people shouldn't eat green food, since it is much more expensive. What’s more, most green food is usually being sold in big supermarkets,making it inconvenient to buy.
On my opinion, people should eat green food if they think they can afford buy it. Why should they want to risk make themselves sick?
Can you imagine wear a pretty sweater made from garbages? It could happen! A few companies across the country are making clothes from things that are being thrown away by people. For example, company makes sweaters of old plastic bottles. First, the bottles are cut into small pieces. The pieces are melted. Then the melting plastic is made into long and thin threads. The threads are used to make sweaters which feels very soft and light.
Believe it or not, these sweaters sell good in spite of the fact which they are not cheap at all. Many people thought that these recycled clothes can help us cut down on garbage.
In the past when batteries (电池) in the electrical equipment in my house ran out, I would just put them on the garbage bag. Last week I learned from magazine that one battery could possible pollute 16 thousand liters of water. It was deeply shocked that a battery should be such a pollutant. Then I came up with an idea. I was decided to change one of my shoe box into a battery recycling box. Then I put them in front of our apartment building. To my joy, the box was filling up in a couple days. Then I call the recycling center to collect the batteries. All workers spoke highly of that I did.
Who is willing to drink the polluting water? It can cause us to be ill but even to die. We can’t wait for the moment to protect our water sources. The water we use coming from the ocean, lakes, rivers or streams. But many of these water sources are getting serious polluted. Towns and cities pump sewage(污水)into the water. Many people are throwing all kinds dirty things into the water. Factories poured waste material into the water. Therefore, water sources have become so badly polluted that some of the water is fit to drink or use it. Now it is high time when we should do something to protect our water environment from being polluted.
Yesterday my classmate and I went to People’s Park. We got to there at 8:00 am. There were such many tall green trees as well colorful flowers. And we enjoyed us very much. However, a lot of rubbish, such as the skins of fruit, plastic bottles and bags, were on the ground. One of my classmates suggested we did something for the park. So we picked up all the pieces of waste one in one. Finally the park became clean again, what made us very happy. I think it was a tired but meaningful day.
The environment pollution became more and more serious today. We will have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more of dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been great affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of diseases causing by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world. We should recycle, reduce and reuse things, that saves money and reduces pollution. Use things as long as possibly. Don’t use plastic bag. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting it clown. We hope our world will he more and more beautiful.