增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us have realized what that our parents are our first teachers. As we grow both physically or mentally, our parents teach us more about society. There have a time when we young people believe that their parents should stop offering their advice and stop acting as teachers. We think that we know much about the world than our parents. Perhaps we believe their opinions and suggest are out of date. We are now standing at top of a great pyramid, wait to take turns to lead the people in this century. Besides, we should remember our parents represent the foundation of that great pyramid. With a solid foundation, nothing can be built.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On-line voting becomes increasing popular. Many competitions get people involving in it. It is beneficial to some people, but it puts the others into a dilemma over if to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting should be welcomed, since it is just a way to participate public life. It is similar in ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek vote. In addition, the Internet make voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.
Things will turn much good if we can work out some rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude of it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
China is serious suffering from unbalanced ratio of sex. According to public information, the crisis started in 1982, where sex ratio in birth was 108.47. Since then, the figure had been growing crazily but reached 115 in 1994. In 2004, it reached at the peak at 121.2, with some provinces at 130, which was an serious deviation from the normal figure. Some researchers predict what around 2020, the population of bachelors in China will be same as the population of Australia. And these man may stay single forever .
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last year summer I went to London for holiday. I spent just a week there. While I am staying there, I visited many places of interest and had lots of friendly talks with all kinds of people. I found very interested thing there. One of my Chinese friends who have been living in London told me that many English families didn’t like to buy new television set. There are many shops where can lend you TV sets. The shops are often filled by a great many people. They can borrow a set very easy, and it costs us only a little. Then it can be taken away and use for long.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Though social media is an important tool, their negative influences of teenagers can’t be neglected. First, when teenagers use social media, they will have difficulty concentrate on their homework. On the other hand, too much time spend using social media may decrease their really life communication. The most dangerous thing is what constant exposure to the fantasy world lead to a lack of self-confidence. Therefore, it tends to harming their dignities. For teenagers, the proper use of social media is must. They should remember it that study is a top priority and thus spend more time on social media.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized how seriously this problem is. And they are never bored with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think smoking can refresh themselves. In the fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is a waste money. What’s more, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出该加的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It's reported that some Chinese tourists behave badly travel at home and abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters at tourist attractions, throw a rubbish everywhere, even cross the road when the traffic lights are still red. Such bad behavior had caused damage to what people think of themselves and our country. Actions should be taken to stop this. First, tourists should be educating to obey social and public order, and respect locally religions and customs. Besides, laws should be made to punish those don't behave politely in public. I hope soon tourists will change their behavior and win respect of themselves and our country.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays we can still see some behavior against public morals. As was often the case, people tend to talk loud in public places, annoyed others around. Spitting and littering rubbish can be seen anywhere. Besides, it’s common that the young or middle-aged sit on the bus when the elderly have to stand.
Measure must be taken to change this situation. First of all, as students, we should manage our own behavior but help people around you form good habits. Meanwhile, it is necessary for the government and some organizations to encourage people to behave proper.
Don’t undervalue the role we can play with. Do remember we can make difference! Take action right now!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, more and more students are facing mental pressure in their life. Some were so worried about their studies that they can’t fall sleep at night. Some are discouraged but tend to lose heart because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or classmates, that makes them feel stressed and get angry easily.
As matter of fact, there are many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First, we can turn to our teacher for help, including our psychological teacher. Second, communicating is of vital importance. When they have a talk about the problems with others, we can be great relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude about our studies and life. With the mental problems being solved, we will study and live happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.
