增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For thousands of years, people had accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges and also intellectual challenges. Some people risk his lives to play sports to see how good they can do. Others try to invent something make life easier. They all enjoy challenges. Today, there are still much challenges before us. Medical science face the challenge of conquering(攻克)many diseases what still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new city and design new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy. In short of, we live in an age full of challenges.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good tourist behavior is of great important for everyone. Cultural and natural sights belong to everyone, included the generations to come and good tourist behavior can help protect. Beside, good tourist behavior can make you have a more enjoy travelling experience. However, some tourists threw away rubbish everywhere. Some take photos which it's strictly forbidden. And others even write or draw anything on the tourist attraction.
It's not hard to give up such bad behavior as long as tourists realise it is harm to the sights. So firstly, the mass media have the responsibility of letting people to know what a good tourist is like. Secondly, tour guides should remind tourists local customs during the journey.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, most people, especially students, use to go to the library or borrow books, such as reference books and novels. Therefore, with the rapid development of the Internet, nowadays fewer or fewer people will go to the library. That’s because they can easy get the information when they need from the Internet. What’s the more, mobile phones and computer have played major roles.
Personally, even though we can do reading from the phones or computers, we are not supposed to spend too much time fix our eyes on the electronic screens, which is not beneficial to his eyes. I strongly suggest we should make full use of our spare time go to the library.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Thanks to China’s anti-poverty policy, great changes have been taken place in my hometown in the past decade, especial in the living conditions. Take my grandparents’ home in the countryside as a example. They used to live in a small house with little furniture, and now they have moved into a two-storied building with modern electric equipments. In the past, we had to ask someone to write to my parents to keep contact. But they each has a mobile phone now, that makes the communication more convenient. They even have learned to use WeChat talk to us. And they mostly drive out instead of walk or ride bicycles at times.
增加:在缺词处加一个 漏字符号(∧),并在其下面。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
On terms of living standards, some households lied in the remote regions still have a low income and live in poverty, whom are hungry for a happy life. The government is taking measure to change their lives. First, make sure all the children should be educated because education is of great important. Second, the government is making efforts improve the development of economy great. Whatever difficult the task may be, we won’t lose heart.
In a conclusion, our dream will come true as long as they work together.