Nowadays, people argue a lot about if or not to celebrate Western festivals, as Western festivals are becoming more and more popular in China, especial among young people. They said they celebrate Western festivals because they are exciting than Chinese festivals. In my opinion, Western festivals are basing on the cultural traditions of the Western country, and I see no reason why we should celebrate their festivals. We are Chinese, and we mustn’t forget our cultural roots. In fact, Chinese cultural traditions are really great, but we should take pride in it. On a word, I am prefer Chinese festivals.
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Dear friends,
I’m here to call everyone to pay attention to the phenomenon of food waste. Like President Xi advocates, it is supposed to be a new fashion for all Chinese people to practice stricter economy and stop waste. It is also a Chinese traditional virtues. We must bear in mind what food is a precious resource on our planet. Waste food goes against the basic moral principles.
It’s high time that we should take our action now. Firstly, when we have dinner in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriate, and try to eat up. Secondly, it’s recommend to promote food saving actions on social media.
So, don’t hesitate to join us. Small actions made a big difference.
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We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
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Good morning! I’m honored to be here but say something about how to reduce food waste. As we all know, food waste is becoming increasing serious in our country. Much food is throwing away after each meal. Therefore, it’s time for we to do something about them.To reduce food waste, we must order just as many food as we can eat. Besides, it was also a good habit to take the leftovers to home when we eat out. Finally, we should take every chances to educate people not to waste food. I believe that every small act can make great difference.
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I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exist some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
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Nowadays, many students are like to pursue famous brands. This phenomenon has aroused widely attention. The following reasons can account on students’ preference for famous brands.
Above all, in many students' eyes, an famous brand is a symbol of taste. They expect others to admire his high-class and good taste. What's more, in modern society, famous brands to some extents are equal to fashion, and it always appealed to teenagers a lot. I think it is unreasonable for students pursue famous brands. Beside, it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really make him high-class.
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A social media influencer is someone who has a plenty of followers online. What that person says, or does, or buys, or wear can influence the decisions of their followers! That is why we call him “social media influencers” and simply “influencers”. I like Miss Manners best between all the influencers. She continual guides me in my online activity and acts as my social compass on a daily basis. When in doubt, I thought to myself “what will Miss Manners do?”. What I’m eager follow is not Miss Manners herself but the overall idea behind her and what she represents. It’s all about be polite, interesting and engaging, which is the point of social media.
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Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from an art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another the twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only differences between these children -- the love, made a great difference to us.
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Today the number of the netizens in our country have increased rapidly, yet many of them do not pay enough attention to the family. It is no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. For an example, it’s convenient for us to get the informations we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. Meanwhile, it could help us learn that is happening both at home and abroad. Therefore, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t separated from our loved ones. We should stop surf the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when you are together.
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It is reported that many people died in traffic accidents every year. Road safety has aroused the wide attentions of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the one related to the passers-by. In my opinion, we should take road safety serious in our daily life. While traveled to work, we should walk on the pavement and learn to protect ourselves. In addition to, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.