增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is shown in the chart, 30% of the teenagers taking drugs are tricked into doing it, and 50% are driven by curious. Another 15% just does this to seek excitement or try to get rid of their anxieties. The rest try it for some other reasons.
As we all know, drugs do many harm to our health, and even causing people to die at an early age. At the same time, it directly led to the happening of crimes. But to our sadness, more and more young people now begin taking drugs.
How do we protect ourselves from drugs? I think we should be careful to make friend and stay away from those always behave badly. In addition, it’s very important for us to have a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude with life. Do remember that try drugs is very dangerous.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m here to call on all of us save food. In our campus, students are often seen wasting food. They either order too much to eat out and throw out the food because of it doesn’t taste good. They may forget the famous line of poetry, “Every grain on the plate come from hard work” or actually don’t get its real meaning. So how should we do to stop this? On the one hand, we should order so much as we can eat and not be too particularly about food. On the other hand, if they cannot finish all the food we order, taking the rest away. Saving food is everybody’s responsible. Let’s start right away!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Should we help strangers? Different people have different opinion. Some think we should help strangers as much as possibly. Helping others probably mean helping ourselves. We may have a day what we need others’ help. If everyone is unwilling help us just because we are strangers to them, that is hard to imagine what our world will be like. However, some are afraid that helping others may be bring us trouble. We may even have to pay the cost for our kind. As far as I am concerning, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also avoid get into trouble. I hope our world will be full of love.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
It is common phenomenon (现象)nowadays what there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on the road. What’s worse, many people always litters here and there in the streets, that makes me concerned. I have some specific ideas to share when it comes to handle these problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever I’m on my way to home. First and foremost, never will I crossed a road until the traffic light turns green. Secondly, I will always use the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw rubbish and spit on the road. More important, it’s necessary for everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” Therefore, let’s join hand to obey traffic rules, which will matter a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用\划掉。
修改:在错词的下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, I see a lot food thrown away by student in our school cafeteria into the dustbins. Some students often bought too much to eat. Others throw away the food just because it doesn’t taste well. In my opinion, the waste of food is unacceptable. After all, many people in the world are suffering from hungry. As a matter of the fact, the waste can be avoided if we raise your awareness of save. Whenever eating, buy no more than what you can eat, but think about what you really like before buying. Besides, remember to pack up the food what you fail to finish.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As it is reported in today’s 21st Century, a pedestrian was walked down a street when someone dropped litter from a building nearby. Knocked unconscious, the person was sent to a nearest hospital immediately. Admittedly, we have the right do whatever we want. Besides, violating others’ rights is unacceptable. Dropping litter from a high place is impolite and dangerous, that presents a potential threat to many people. If this behavior continue, everyone is likely to suffer from it.
I think the person throwing litter randomly deserves a severe punish. All of us should devote ourselves to improve our own behavior. Most importantly, laws should be introduced by the authorities. And I sincerely hope such cases won’t happen some more.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As it is reported in today’s 21st Century, a pedestrian was walked down a street when someone dropped litter from a building nearby. Knocked unconscious, the person was sent to a nearest hospital immediately.
The horrible report has set me thinking. Admittedly, we have the right do whatever we want. Besides, violating others’ rights is unacceptable. Dropping litter from a high place is impolite and dangerous, that presents a potential threat to many people. If this behavior continue, everyone is likely to suffer from it.
I think the person throwing litter randomly deserves a severe punish. All of us should devote ourselves to improve our own behavior. Most importantly, laws concerning should be introduced by the authorities. With our joint efforts, our society will surely become good. And I sincerely hope such cases won’t happen any more.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Internet has taken control of the planet in these days. Making friends online is another freshly new way of social communication.
What everyone knows, making friends online is convenient. We can click on a mouse to contact others with eyes fixing on the screen. Except that, making friends online can save large amounts of time, and all the information we need are through the cable. Therefore, to the best of myself knowledge, every coin has two sides. Making friends online can also do harm to us. Information posted online may fake and the link can install massive virus packages in our computers to stealing the passwords or bank accounts. Hackers may use our curious to blackmail us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A cosmetic company's quirky(古怪的) video advert has backfired with customer saying they will refuse to buy its products.
Purcotton, the Chinese company owned by Winner Medical Co., released the video on Douyin, the Chinese version of TikTok. The video starts with a woman walking along and being followed by a man who face is covered. Looking concerned, the woman produces a Purcotton wet wipe and removes his makeup. When the man taps her shoulder, she turns out and a man's face is shown.
"What’s up, brother?” asks the woman, in a manly voice. Vomiting sounds and visual effects have been added.
More than 3,000 commented, mainly offended by how acceptable the video is, stated it’s appalling that they should normalize stalking(骚扰). A female Weibo user said it was really not funny that a woman’s looks were being made fun.
China Women’s News condemned Purcotton and comment that the video was full of bias, gender stereotypes and ignorance.
Purcotton has withdrawn the video and apologized for the discomfort caused to women, saying future advertising content will be strict examined.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The US has fell to the 28th place in the latest report measuring social progress worldwide. The report looks 50 well-being factors, such as access to health care, safe and the environment. It is common acknowledged that the nation ranks the first for its advanced education and quality universities. Therefore, its access to quality basic education only reached No. 91. And although America leads in medical technology, citizens access to quality health care is ranked No. 97. “The data paints an alarmed picture of the state of our nation—we are no longer which we used to be.” said Michael Porter, a Harvard professor.