增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather had a car’s accident yesterday, which made me worried and sadly. The disaster is happened like this. My grandfather was working in a field. Feeling tiring, he sat beside the road to rest. All of a sudden, a truck changed its direction, rushed straight to my grandfather, but hit him heavily. The truck driver caused the accident due to speak on his cell phone. My grandfather didn’t get emergency care unless the ambulance arrived. After examination, it was found that my grandfather had several bone broken. He had to receive operations. The doctor said it would take long time for him to recover.
We should always take care of us as danger is everywhere.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, when Chen Hui was pouring hot water, he poured a lot into his wrist by accident. Although he felt great pain, but he didn’t know what to do. I happened to see this and immediate gave him first aid. Firstly, I asked him place the burns under running water for 10 minutes. After that, I put some cloth in cold water, squeezed the water out and placed them on the burning area over and over again. Finally, I covered the burns with the clean bandage. Gradually, he felt much better, that made me happy and proud of myself. Chen Hui expresses his thanks and said he would gain some knowledge of first aid so that I could offer help to others when needed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today when I went for a walk, I found some people quarreling beside a car. Out of curious, I got close to see what had happened. A dog was finding lying beside the car and dead. It was the car which hit it to death! The dog owner was so anger that he shouted at the driver. He was asked the driver to pay for it. But the driver didn’t agree. The quarrel didn’t end until a policeman came.
After looking the video, the policeman said to a dog owner, “You didn’t tie your dog. It ran here and there. So it was not the driver’s fault but your. He needn’t pay anything.” Feel embarrassed, the dog owner left unhappy at the end.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Patricia Pania never wanted to be a public figure. All she wanted to be is a mother and homemaker. But her life was turned upside down when a motorist, was attracted by his cell phone, ran a stop sign and crashed in the side of her car. The impact (撞击) killed her 2-year-old daughter. Four month later, Pania unwillingly and bravely decided to try to educate the public and to fight for laws to ban drivers using cell phones while a car is moving. In her speech she wanted to save another children from that happened to her daughter. Many in the audience were moved to tears, and to action. Pania gained reputation as a high affective speaker. Her appearance on a talk show was broadcast three times, send her message to over 14 million people. Her campaign increased public awareness of the problem, and caused over 300 cities and several states to consider restrictions (限制) on cell phone use.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night I was having a shower in the bathroom at about 10:30 while the silence was broken by some unusual noises in outside. I quickly got dressing and ran out of the bathroom, only find a big fire on the third floor of our flat building. Luckily, most of the people, including my family, have left the building by the time the firefighters arrived. But a baby along with his parents were still trapped in a flat on a fourth floor. The firemen were true great. Some put out the fire but the others managed to rescue the parents and their baby. We are really grateful to the brave firefighters who risked their own lives to save ourselves.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I was late for school because I became caught in a serious traffic jam in my way to school. The traffic jam was causing by an accident. A girl was hit by a bus while she was crossing the road. She was in so a hurry that she ran a red light. Just as she was crossing, a bus knocked into my bike. It was too late for her stop her bike so she was knocked over, that made her unable to move. She hurt her leg very bad. I think this accident is not a good lesson for all of us. It tell us the importance of obeyed the traffic rules.
言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It isn’t hard to be the responsible member of the society.
I remember an incident that happened a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for the green light at a crossing while a girl of about 10 was hit by a passed car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushes to give the girl first aid but I joined in it without hesitation. Fortunate, she was not badly injured, and we sent her away to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped drivers, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is how it takes to make the society better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went skated on a lake with one of my best friend, Lucy. We having a good time on the ice when I suddenly hear someone shouting “Help”. I turned around immediately and was surprised to see a boy, which was struggling in an ice hole. As neither of us could to swim, we ran to ask for help as soon as possibly. A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled a boy out of the water. The boy thanked us again and again by saving his life. We were happy to have given her a helping hand.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thomas Panek loves sports and every winter he often go skiing in the mountains. He went skiing in the Andes in last December. It was a good day, so Panek didn’t think that something badly would happen. However, when he was skiing down a slope, a lot of snows fell down from the mountain. The snow buried him but he could not move. He was calm because he can see some light. He sent messages to the rescuers, which could know where he was. At last, he saved and sent back home. The accident didn’t stop him from love mountains. A few days later, he went back here again.
