增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As an adolescent boy, I am told not to pay many attention to my physically appearance by my parents. She always think that character-building matter more. However, many of my friends have got in shape and built themselves up by go to the gym regularly. Influenced by them, I come to found myself increasingly concerned about my body image, which makes me confused. On the one hand, I agree with my parents what I should develop my inner strength and just to keep healthy. On the other hands, I'm afraid to be teased by my friends because my body shape.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a 5-year-old sister． Sometimes she fights against myself for candies．When Mom makes me to give my share to her，I always feel unwillingly．Last week，I caught serious cold and had to follow the doctor’s advices to take medicine． Before I came home from school，I noticed her leaving candies beside my medicine．I go up to her and asked“Hey，what are you doing？”In a smile，she said to me，“Candies make me happy because I put them here to make you happy today．”That was the greatest thing which I’d ever experienced．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father has just returned back home from Hubei. He stays there for half a year. For the first three month, he lived in Wuhan and picked fruit at a farm, which is a wonder place. Afterwards, he had to move to Yichang to finish other job. There he worked in elegant Sichuan restaurant. He loved it because it reminded him of his hometown. This job was hard, but there were some nice people work with him. He really had fun during this trip, and that surprised him most was that he got his communication skills improve greatly in the process. He hopes to go back there sometimes in the future.
The person I’m extremely thankful is my father. Every morning, when he gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for my family. Whatever busy he is, he will drive me to and from school, whether it was rainy or sunny. Whenever I am blue or feel anxious about my grades, he will take me to a park, or invite me to see the movie to help me get relaxing. Besides, the positive view he hold of life has an everlasting influence on myself. I’m a happy and confidence student because of his care or consideration.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children. Let’s take Mary for example. Mary used to being a healthy girl. But over a year ago, she got into the habit of eating a lot junk food and snacks. However, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, but doing little exercise. As a result, she put up so much weight that she found it difficulty to climb the stairs. So Mary decided to change the unhealthy lifestyle. She began to have a balancing, healthy diet. She also took part in various sports activity such as swimming, skating, running and playing the basketball. Months later, Mary became as fit as before.
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I go to high school, I saw some of me classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they was, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them careful to learn their techniques. Then I kept practice until I became confident enough challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best player in my class. I am really proud with this experience, because it helps me realize that what we all can fulfill our potential but achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand a proverb “Practice makes perfect.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It's well known what health is important to us.But what should we do to keep health?Firstly,we should get up early and then eat food,drink a lot of waters and exercise more.Food can give our energy.Doing sports can made us strong.Secondly,we should change clothes and wash hands often.Also,we should do cleaning and keep air in the house fresh and clean to stop germs（细菌）from get into our bodies.Especial,don't keep long fingernails.For last,we had better to go to see a doctor if we don't feel comfortable.
