增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently I have moved by an advertisement which encourage people to go home more often. I don't think it costs too many to show love for our parents. First, do not just visit them during holidays or at weekends and try to accompany them as much as possible. Second, if time permits, it does them well to take them to travel. Traveling is a good way for us to get relaxed and enjoyed the beautiful scenery outdoors. Finally, we'd better have a chat with them, so they can exchange ideas for us and know that what is going on in our life. Anyway, better later than never.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The classmate I want to thank most
In the past two years, I have been received lots of help from my dear classmates, among which, Wang Lin is the one I want to thank most.
Wang Lin, our monitor, is an active but optimistic young man. He likes playing football and piano. Being helpful, he always does everything in his power to help whomever needs help. I have every reason to expressing my sincere gratitude. Firstly, with his encouragement, I’ve become quite confident. Besides, I won’t have made such rapid progress in my studies without his help. Most important, it’s under his influence where I’ve become an excellent volunteer.
I’ve learned many good qualities from him and I’ll always be grateful with him for his generous help.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Never will I forget one experience in my English class the last year．One day my English teacher Mr．Zhang was going to announce the exam result and I was afraid that I might probable get scolded as before．I felt such nervous that I couldn’t focus on anything before her class．Surprisingly，when enter the classroom，he glanced at us，saying gently，“Today I am excited to tell you that one of your classmates，which name is Li Hua，wrote all excellent English article in the exam．And I do hope he will make more progresses．”It was the first time that I got praised before my classmates，so you couldn’t imagine what grateful I was to Mr．Zhang．With his praise，I couldn’t have gone so far in my English study．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have practiced any small acts of kindness such as smiling at people or making some small talks with even strangers. Yesterday, I went a step farther. I spent about half an hour think about every single person to which I am grateful. I wish them all the best. I also thought of our beautiful planet and silent expressed my gratitude for the stars, the sun, moon, the water, the plants and animals around us and so on. Because of we are nothing without them, these things made me smile. I wished for peace both in every single person or in the world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host family for the British students. Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment meet all their needs. Apart from the convenience public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest. With fluent English but an outgoing personality, I’m sure I will have no difficulty communicating with them. Above all, we host two British students last year, through that we’ve gained lots of experience. In addition, my mother’s expert cooking can guarantee for them a wonderful chance of taste delicious Chinese food.
I would greatly appreciate if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m an senior high school student named Leo. Now many students have iPads and think it’s a fashion to use it. With iPads, we can listen to music, downloading a lot of learning materials and read ebooks on the screen. Obvious, it’s beneficial our study. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, that makes other students very annoying. Some of them even waste precious times playing video games in class. In my view, as students, we should make good use of iPads to improve our study. The classroom is a place for students to study, but concentration is greatly needed when we are learning. Furthermore, the school should find a way to let the students to use iPads in a proper way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Ms. Wood,
I was a guest who stayed in your hotel a week ago. First of all, I want to express my sincere thanks for your good service which makes my stay in Australia more enjoyable. Therefore, you can do better in some aspects.
To begin with, I found out only one Chinese dish on the menu, that gave me a big surprise. Is it possible for you to provide Chinese dishes with more variety? In addition, it took me long time to find the emergency exit. Please make the signs well-marking. Finally, the clerk at the front desk could be more patiently. When asking about where to find the nearest swimming pool, she seemed rather annoyed.
I do hope you will take their advice into consideration. Thanks for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
