增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分.
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great variety of robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, including playing chess, playing piano and drawing pictures. What's more, the robots are in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced just as if we were dancers on the stage. By visit Robot World, I have learned a lot about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is so powerful that it makes us to feel more comfortable to live in the world.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What do we do after a college entrance examination? It’s a question what concerns most students. To have a thorough understanding of the situation, you had a heated discussion.Most students chose to do works on selecting a suitable university. Besides, there is many a way improve us. Obtaining a driving license or learning other useful skills interest quite a few students. There are many students plans to work during the longest summer vacation to earn pocket money and get social experience as well as.
It’s good to see so many students have their own plans to their life. In my opinion, whatever we choose to do, we’d better make life rich and meaningfully.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。-
With the purpose of help students better learn about tradition Chinese culture, our school carried out an event. The event naming “Wearing Hanfu and leaning Tang poems” was held on last Friday in the School Hall. About 200 student from our school took part in it active. Not only did we worn ancient Hanfu, but also learned how to write Tang poems. Then, we had a chance to read our Tang poems aloud. Three of them, including me, were regarded as the best poems. It turned out that the event was great success to us but it was highly praised by most of the participants.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school held a voluntary activity to caring for the elderly in the community last Sunday. All the students in my class participated in an activity. We were divided into six groups to perform various tasks. I was in group 3, which job was to help the elderly clean them doors and windows. I was extreme efficient. Besides, I also introduced them to some useful app, which they were very interested. The activity has deepened my understand of the importance of taking care of the elderly, which is a responsibility of each person. If everyone reached out to those in need, and our communities will be much more harmonious.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ⋀),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Home security is becoming one of the fastest growing technology market. Previously, home owners have to get expensive alarms. These systems could not be relied upon, and would even be set off if there was a power cut. Nowadays, with advancements in technology, it is easy to add extra protection your home at affordable prices. Companies like Nest and Ring have been released doorbells that also have the camera. The main selling point of these devices are that when someone rings your doorbell, you can choose to answer via your phone， even if you're not in the house. This can drive out thieves as they believe the house is occupied. You are able to turn the lights on and off while in another country，making it appears occupied. You can also monitor smart security cameras what can sit in your home, or outside on your walls. These also allow you to monitor your pets and children, keep your loved ones under your watchful eyes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the future, the house will built with environmentally-friendly materials. The materials can produce electricity by take in air.
They can also keep the house at a pleasant temperature all year round, that makes the house more comfortably to live in. Besides, if there has an accident happening in the house, the host will receive a alarm call immediately. More importantly, once some natural disasters break off, the house can fly away to avoid it.
Although the house is still a dream, but I believe the dream will come true with the develop of science and technology.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On January 5th, students in our school visit Robot World, where we saw an great variety of robots. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, included playing chess, playing the piano and drawing pictures. What’s more, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, that made us pleasant. In addition, what excited me most was the show given by a group of robot. They danced just as if we were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is such powerful that it makes us to feel more comfortable to live in the world.
