增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处。
Last Sunday, I spent my lucky money on the special gift for my grandma. Early in the morning, I went to a cellphone store and choose a cellphone specially designing for seniors. I gave it to my grandma when I visited her at the weekend. On receive the cellphone, Grandma was very happy and eager to learn how to use it. I patiently explained several important function she needed. My grandma learned carefully and wanted have a try. Under my help, she successful called one of her friends. That afternoon, my grandma proudly told her neighbors that she could make calls with the new cellphone I bought it for her. They all praised what thoughtful I was.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a very busy afternoon. The store was fill with many people. I select a few things as quickly as possible but then went to the checkout. There I found many people waiting their orders to be checked out. I was worried, thinking he would be late to pick up my two child. Just then, an old man, which stood in front of me, said, “You don’t have many things. Why not just going in front of me?” “Thanks, but you don’t have many neither,” I said. He just smiled and stepped away to make the room for me. I was so thankful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m 53 years old. I had lived in Liverpool for twenty years and I need to take the No.43 bus from my home to the post office every Wednesday. However, it’s service is not well. The bus only comes every twenty minute. What made me angry was that happened last Wednesday, when it was such a terrible weather! I waited forty-five minutes in the cold and rain, so three empty double-deckers passed me without stopping. As a result, stand by the road, I had to wait another No.43 bus. I waved hardly and patiently to make the driver see me and stop.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the winter vacation, I worked as volunteer in Xinhua Bookstore. I work 8 hours every day for more than 20 days. There. I mainly did some cleaning, put the books with order and introduced much books to customers. I helped the shop assistants to sell more than 3,000 copies of books. Through the activity, I've come to fully understanding that it is not easily to work. Meanwhile, I have also learned how to communicate with different customer, which has built up your confidence. This great activity has not only been enriched my social life, and inspired me to study harder and realize my future dreams.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When an English traveler, who spent a few week in Sweden, was about to return to home, he found he had only enough money left to get a ticket to England. Since it was only two-day voyage, he believed he can get home without eating anything. He final bought a ticket with that little money and went to board the ship. He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place where people had his dinner when dinnertime came. Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. He then said, “Waiter, brings me the bill.” “Oh, meals are included in the ticket.” said the waiter.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family traveled by the air today. We have planned to sit together on the plane. As expecting, we were happily seated closely to each other. Suddenly, we heard the flight attendant asking a women a few rows of seats behind us to change her seat , it was more convenient for a father with a baby. The lady was rather unhappily with this. So I immediately stood up and let the man and his baby took my seat instead. I moved to the front of the plane alone. My sister had plenty interesting stories about the baby. I had to sleep all the way, and I still felt happy because I did something meaningful for the family.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who name is Zhang Juan. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Though she is clever, but she studies very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing his homework when she smelt something burning. She stopped to look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediately. Ten minutes late, the firemen came and put out fire. They were very thankfully for her help.