增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was my 17th birthday and I was looking forward to see my friends. I arrived at my favorite restaurant, waiting for him. We would have the special birthday dinner. I looked for a familiar face but failed. Soon the restaurant was filled customers, none of which were my friends. An hour later, I went back home, lonely and disappointing. To my great surprised, I found the door was wide open when I arrived home. Nervously, I walk into the dark room. Suddenly, all the light went on and my friends were appeared shouting “surprise”. I had an unforgettable birthday.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a good friend calls Tony. He is our monitor and he as well as some other classmates in our class is outstanding. Though he is a cleverer boy, he works very hard. Have much in common, we have a lot to talk about. One evening he told me what something happening when his parents were out. He was doing his homework one Sunday morning while he smelt something burning. He stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of his neighbour’s house. He called 119 immediately. Ten minutes late, the firemen came and put off the fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for his help.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How’s everything go? There’s live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall. I’m writing to invite you to go with myself.
The concert is about Chinese folk music, that is of common people who live in the country. Beside, there are many regional styles of folk music for us to enjoy. Additionally, the players are the top musician in China. As a Chinese learner, you will surely be interested in it.
The concert was from 7 pm to 9 pm. I’ve got two tickets for my mother. Shall we to meet at 6: 30 pm at the entrance gate of the hall?
Looking forward to your earlier reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, friendship plays a important part in our life. If we have close friend, we can not only share happiness with them but also get support and encouragement from them, that can make us live a much happier life. Unluckily, many young people misunderstood the meaning of friendship. They think anyone who help them escape punishment is a friend. In my opinion, a good friend is a friend who is honesty and willing to give you a hand when you in trouble. He or she is always telling you the truth and is willing to help you correcting mistakes. Beside, I think we must respect for our friends and treat them in the way we want to be treated.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays Senior 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually, make friend with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for“impossible is nothing”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We are now living in an age, that TV, cellphones and the Internet are wide used. It seemed that many people can not enjoy themselves without it. However, if I have to give up one of them, I will turn off TV rather than turning off my cellphone and cut off the Internet. I can live without TV because of few TV shows can expand my imagination and there are too much commercials. Besides, most programs are also easy to see elsewhere. When it comes to cellphones and the Internet, they are more necessary for me. I need cellphone to keep in touch with my friends and family members, and all informations can be gathered on the Internet.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It fills my heart with two feelings until I pick up my pen to write to you. One is the great joy of having landed a foreign country for post-graduation. The other, obviously, is the sadness of be away from you all.
I actually felt tired after having travelled by air for such many hours. Then getting settling also exhausted me. Although the college and the lecturers are the second to none in perfectness, at several moments I felt like bursting into tear. I felt extreme homesick. Finally, that has not been overcome totally, so far. Yes, one had to be strong, in the end.
There is a number of things to share but I will stop myself here.
