增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last night, my parents told me that we will have a picnic with my uncle Peter and their family in a park. I was so excited as I could hardly fall asleep. This afternoon, we met in the park at 3:00. The adult sat on the ground, talking about the work and family issues. My cousins and I went away fly kites. At first, we tried but failed to make it. Therefore, we didn’t give up easy. Instead, we helped with each other and finally we all succeeded. After that, we enjoyed the delicious food bringing from home and appreciated the beautiful scenery of the park. For me, it was the truly relaxing day.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限—词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was my grandfather’s birthday on last Friday. Early in the morning, my parents and I set off for the department store to look at a gift. Eventually a warm sweater is bought. To give my grandpa a surprise, I decided to baking a birthday cake. With mom’s help, it still took me a long time when it was my first homemade cake. The moments the cake was out the oven, the celebration began. Watch Grandpa enjoy the cake, I got a greatly sense of achievement. We took a picture of the whole family to record the happiness moment.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had always gotten along well with my parents. Unlucky, we started to argue about what majors I should choose at university one year ago. Our arguments are getting even bad now because the time to complete the application forms and apply to universities are drawing near. I want to study computer software programming, so my parents suggest that I must become a doctor. All my parents are doctors, and they see it as carry on a family tradition. I had never wanted to be doctor and I hate every minute of it. How can I handle this situation?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to visit my beloved grandmother, that is already in her seventy. She took care of myself when I was in primary school. Delighted to see me, she held my hands and hurry to bring me something delicious. Heard that I would be a senior three student soon, she told me not be nervous and that everything would be OK. Then she also stressed that study and healthy were equally important. Feeling so warmly, I promised her that I would make full preparations for the coming entrance examination both physical and mentally. I firmly believe that I will get satisfying results the next year.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents hadn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework but decided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my the first cooking. I went online to find information on how cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my parents got home, they were amazing to see the tasty dishes I made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed the meal that evening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
Many students are unwilling to do housework at home, say that they are too busy studying. However, in my opinion, students should spent some time helping with housework. Here are some reason. If we left all the housework to our parents, it will make them very much tired. For our part, being independent is really benefit. As a matter fact, the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. Doing housework can help us to learn to look after us. Now we are no long small children, but we ought to help with housework to reduce our parents’ burdens.
My father has a real neat vegetable garden. Every year he planted different kinds of vegetables for us to eating. Last year his corn were ten feet high and his tomato plants grew five feet high! I often help with him in the garden. We dig the hard ground in early spring, sow rows of seeds, and keep them water and safe from insects. When harvest time arrives, they happily pick the vegetables we have grown. We usually have too much vegetables in August. As result, my mother will freeze some for the winter month from December to March.
