增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble get along with your friends. Here is my advices. First, talk with your friends often. It is the good idea to share your happiness and sadness to them. Second, helping each other was very important. It’s better for you to help your friends have trouble in study or daily life. And they will be help you when you need help. Third, learn to appreciate your friends’ strengths. In this way, you can make really friends. Whether you follow my suggestions, I believe your friends will understand them better.
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Dear Chen Hui,
I’m sorry to learn that you intend to drop out of high stress. As one of your friend, I hope that you can give up the idea. The following is the reasons.
First of all, you should have a right attitude towards stress, what is a small part in our normally life. Second, I suggest you to calm down, find out the cause of your stress and attempt to deal with them. As to what to reduce the stress, you may take exercise, listen to music and turn to your teachers or classmates for help.
I hope that you can take my suggestion into account and I’m convinced that you will make right decision.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Honesty, considering as a good quality, is of vital important. Honest people win respect while a liar is looked down because dishonesty results in distrust and even ruins one’s name. So how to be the honest student? Firstly, don’t copy homeworks or cheat in the exam. Beside, you’d better to keep your promise and try to do things well. More importantly, tell the truth instead of lies. Only in this way can you make progress in your studies and made more friends. If you’re honest with other, you’ll be treated the same way. There is no doubt whether honest students will have a bright future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I try my best put myself in the local culture. The following two ways always make this easier to do this: either you stay there longer or you visit it more frequent. Once you don't regard yourself to a tourist, you will start seeing things in the different way and start experiencing things like a local person. One of my longest trip was recently in Xi'an, when I stayed for a month. As days went by, life moves forward from take long walks to tasting delicious local foods. I'd never been enjoyed these before that trip, so I have decided to go for a much longer stay next time I travel.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多则(从第11处起)不计分。
Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all your lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in front of us. But real friendship was not easy to come by. True friendship must be sincere and be based on understanding each other but not on benefits of each other. A good of friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. However, the more friends we have, better we can improve ourselves.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A recent situation made I realize that breaking promises might unintentionally hurt others’ feelings. It has happened a month ago when a classmate asked me to help him move house. I was unwilling to refuse the request directly, so I promised to assisting him. Later, I just didn’t bother to turn out to help him because I was absorbing in my studies. When I ran into him next day, he told me I had real let him down. He still forgives me without a second thought, but I felt ashamed by myself. Since then, I hadn’t made a promise that I couldn’t keep.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, when I was trying to decide if to study overseas,I talked to my friend. This was the better thing I could have done. This was a big decision for me because I had ever been overseas on my own and I was not sure if I could do it. She had studied overseas previous year. She told me about the challenges and opportunity I might come across and help me make the right decision. I went and it was amazed.
Whenever I face with an important decision, I seek advice from another. In this way, I am well-informed but have the benefit of their ideas and experiences.