假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Hi Chris
I think going to a gym is a good way to keep health and strong. If your friend wants to be stronger, and he should try to go there more often.
Yes, there have some pills to make you look strong. Therefore, they have side effects, that will damage your health. After your friend taking this kind of pill for some time, his hair might fell out or he might have health problems, some of which may even affect her liver or heart. Some athlete, whose achievements were great, died very young because they take this kind of pill. I don’t think your friend should take the risk .
Tell your friend not take the pills because he may have health problems in the future, when it is too late.
Jeff
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I became interesting in playing football because a small accident. At that time, I was in primary school. One afternoon which I was walking by the school playground, suddenly, a football fell just in the front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. I was persuaded to join them. From now on, I started to play football with classmates after school. Now, I am a member of our school football team.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The doctor told me and my brother that we had to get more exercises.
We all tried exercising at the gym, riding bikes, and lift weights. We hate all of them. We had to find an activity what was fun, if we were going to stick to them. One day we saw a poster for dancing lessons in our community center. We decided sign up. After the first lesson we knew we had been found our exercise program. It was lots of fun. It wasn’t long before we formed the dance team, and competed against another dancers in the city.
Now we get all the exercise we need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I would like to talk about my favorite sport, running. I only take it up a few months ago thanks to my colleagues whom are professional runners. I spend more than two hours run every afternoon. There are several reasons why I am fond this sport. First, it is the pretty cheap and easy sport to try. All I need is a pair of running shoes. Second, this is a sport that can bring us some new friends. Third, since I started this sport I have hardly caught any more common health issue like fever, flu, or cold. What’s more, I can show higher productivity than before and work for longer hours without feeling tiring. All in all, I recommend that everyone tries this sport.
