增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Among the things what have happened to me, there is one that I will never forget.
One Saturday, I invited Eric my house. Unfortunate, I was bitten by my dog. Then the wound started to bleed. After apply pressure to the area with a clean bandage, Eric cleaned my wound with soap and water under running water for at least 5 minute. Therefore, the wound didn’t stop bleeding after 10 minutes of direct pressure. At that urgent moment, he send me to the nearest hospital for further treatment. The doctor thought highly of my action.
I was so grateful to him. And from this unforgettable experience, I realized the important of first aid. So, to help myself out and save others, I have learned some knowledge about first aid after that.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除︰把多余的词用斜线(l)划掉。
修改︰在错的词下面划一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At eight o'clock in the morning, Li Hong was opened his jewellery shop for business." I had a stranger feeling that day," he said. The stranger entered his shop and stole three ring while Li Hong was getting some more rings out of the back his shop." It all happened so quick," he added.
Running after the man, he fell over, push the thief to the ground, too. Eyewitnesses said it was the best football tackle(橄榄球中的擒拿) what they had never seen! The thief went to prison and that Li Hong got his rings back. People felt that justice was done.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over 27 million Chinese watch the first online concert of Irish band Westlife at Friday night. Hold in London and livestreamed on WeChat, the concert impressed Chinese fans deep with many hit songs, as well as a Chinese song. Besides the good pronunciation in a Chinese song, the band’s interactions also thrilled the audience. For many Chinese, their most favourite English songs were by Westlife. The band left a mark on them during their youth, but the concert allowed them to share their memories with peer across the globe. This was just WeChat’s first move invite more global celebrities, said Zhu Liqun, which leads the marketing department.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄ ) 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Marty Fielding began to suffer from a muscle disease when he was 10, that sometimes made him clumsy and drop things or bump into furniture. The doctors don’t know exact what is wrong with him, so they don’t know how to make him better. But he has to learn adapt to his disability. When some people cannot accept him for who he is, he doesn’t get annoying. He just ignores them. All in to all, he has a good life. He doesn’t have time to sit around feeling sorry to himself. In many way his disability has helped him grow strong psychologically and become more independent. He has to work hard to live an normal life. From him, we know we shouldn’t feel sorry for the disable or make fun of them and that we shouldn’t ignore them either.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the 100th anniversary of our school approached, we are going to hold an exhibition in celebrate of it. We sincerely hope that all students will provide artworks to celebrate its birthday.
Firstly, we will be happy to see photos of different school activities which had left a deep impression with you. However, you can write Chinese poems, sharing with your sweet experiences of school life. Paintings also preferred. Whatever your works are, they will show your talents on the occasion. Lastly of all, it is a good opportunity to express your best wishes to the school as well as display our colorful school life.
Please submit your work before January 30th to the mailbox, xx7788@ 163.com.
Yesterday I spent a splendid time with my robot named Aido who read books to me, playing my favorite music and told me funny stories. Aido controlled our household devices as turning on or off the lights. It offered a plenty of online courses that I wanted to learn. It also answered my questions about various topic. When I told it I was hungry and what I desired eat, it made food for me immediately. However, Aido could understand and read my emotions. We share communication from time to time throughout the wholly day. I am amazing at the advancement of science and technology, it brings great convenience and happiness to our life.
