增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄ ) 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处。
Marty Fielding began to suffer from a muscle disease when he was 10, that sometimes made him clumsy and drop things or bump into furniture. The doctors don’t know exact what is wrong with him, so they don’t know how to make him better. But he has to learn adapt to his disability. When some people cannot accept him for who he is, he doesn’t get annoying. He just ignores them. All in to all, he has a good life. He doesn’t have time to sit around feeling sorry to himself. In many way his disability has helped him grow strong psychologically and become more independent. He has to work hard to live an normal life. From him, we know we shouldn’t feel sorry for the disable or make fun of them and that we shouldn’t ignore them either.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多改(从第11处起)不计分。
I have been collecting the songs of the Beatles for a long time. The first time when I saw them on the television , I was immediately attracting by them. Actual, the reason why I love the songs is because my favourite song Yesterday is among them, which conveys sadness. Besides, not all their songs were like that song. Some are funny; others are cheerful and express original idea and have lovely tunes.
The Beatles seemed to have a ability to describe the hopes and fears of young people and communicate them. I’m sure our music will be remembered forever.
增加:在缺词处加 个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划 横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限 词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. Now, I learn that one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all round. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. Unless you have interests in it, write to me.
Yours,
Lucy
Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet, because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway, which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smartphone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various of study aid apps aimed at student. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient they are, these apps present problems with both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Therefore, this isn’t to say that study aid apps should be completely ban. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps’ strengths and avoiding their weaknesses.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.