增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, or most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late thirty, I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10-year-old daughter Amy whispers: “Mum, I love that lady’s suit!” “Why not telling her about it?” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.
“Excuse me. Madam. You look amazed today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with excite: “Oh thank you, you’ve made my day.”
Saying something nice can change the direction of someone’s day, what costs us nothing but means a lot of to them. Children don’t just automatic become kind adults — we need to teach and show them how.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I’d like to sharing my volunteering experience at the Olympic Games. My main task was to help the athletes communicate reporters and medical staff. The languages in the great need were Russian, German, Chinese and Japanese. I could speak all the four language. During the competition I was free to watch the games, but I could talk with other volunteers, sharing with them their joy of volunteering. Before the competition, the players were interviewed where we worked. When the players entered the room, everything got crazily, especially when they win. Everyone wanted to ask them questions. And I will never forget the days when I spent with those kind people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On Sunday, Lin Feng, senior high student, was hanging out by the river. Just then a 72-year-old man loses his balance and fell into the water. Many people stood by and recorded that was happening on their phones. None of them were willingly to save the old man. Seeing the old man was in a bad situation, Lin Feng decided to help him with even though he was not good at swimming. The boy jumped into the river and failed to take him to the bank. He held the man up for 15 minute before he became too exhausting. Thankfully, others had joined her by then, and they carried them to safe.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exist some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
With Mother’s birthday approaching, I decided to give her surprise and celebrate it for her on my own. After finishing my work, I learned what to bake a cake online. I had everything needed after I started the baking process careful as instructed. I preheated the oven and mixed with the milk, eggs, butter or oil into the dry mixture. It take me roughly 20—30 minutes to bake the cake.
It was really a challenging job. And then, I was immediately busy prepared all the dishes. Seeing what she had done, my mother was moved with tear rolling in her eyes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every day I go to school by bike. In my opinion, cycling is an environmental friendly form of transport. It is also a good way to exercise, from whom I benefit a lot. Besides, it can give me many chances to experienced love and kindness. Yesterday one such thing had happened to me. It was on my way to school that something was wrong with my bike. I didn’t know how to do. Just then a passer-by volunteer to have it repaired. I offered himself some money in return his help. He refused, saying help others was what he should do. Hearing his word, I was deeply moved and decided to pass it on.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in different country is something sounded very exciting. It is a new experience, where brings the opportunity of discovering amazed things. It also brought a feeling of freedom. Despite of these advantages, therefore, there are also some challenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjust to quite different things. To be exactly, culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when you first arrive in another country.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Jane Eyre is a world-famous storybook, which is very popular to middle school students. The main character Jane is one of my favorite heroine. The book tells us not only about her hard life and about her efforts to gain her happiness. It were her perseverance and determination which helped her to get what she deserved at last. I liked Jane very much, and her story leaves a great effect on her life and study. I make up my mind work hard at my lessons. Meanwhile, I will try to make the full use of any opportunity to train my characters, especial my tolerance and perseverance to solve all of the difficulties in my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Lending a hand to people make me happy. One day, I saw Sally, my assistant, cried. I asked her about my problem and she said that her mom was sick. She didn’t have enough money to have her mother fully examining, so I decided to give her one of my diamond ring. It didn’t cost as many as the others, but I knew that it would be in great help if she sold it. I recommended an online shop that I often bought jewelry. Sally sold it and used the money to let her mother to be hospitalized. It is great feeling that you can help other people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I learn that some people laugh at me for being overweight. Don’t be so worried about your figure.
I know a group calling HOOP from the Internet, which is established to be the voice of the overweight persons. It made up of a group of friendly and supportive people, all understanding the struggle of being overweight. So you will not feel lonely when you exercise. There are a plenty of activities and trainer who don’t push you to do what you dislike. With their support and encourage it’s easy for you to leave your comfort zone and try something new.
I would high recommend HOOP to you. Whether it’s to complete a personal challenge and start a healthier lifestyle, HOOP can really help you become the best version of you. Although you keep exercising, your figure will be good than before. Best wishes!
Yours,
Vivian
