增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every year my family goes to the beach for a holiday.I remember of one year when my sister and I find a secret cave. We were tired of play in the sea so we decided to do something interested. We soon discovered a big cave. We careful stepped in and soon felt very cold.It was dark but there was an awful smell. We walked deeper inside and then mine sister shouted.She pointed at the wet wall,but I could not saw anything.We were both unable move. We nervously looked at each other and then quickly ran out of a cave.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, say that I was so young to take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didn’t give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Following my parents’ direction, I’ve learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days that we accompanied each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分
Nowadays, the great number of people, especially young people, like ordering meals online. It’s not surprised. First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people had less time to cook even one meal for themselves. Second, the development of technology bring us smart phones and new apps, what may lead to the increase in online service. However, we should pay more attention to food. As we all know it, our health is closely related to what we eat. Although the service provides us convenience, we must take the food safety into considerate. Home-made food is cleaner and healthy, so I prefer to cook food at home rather than ordering meals online.
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线 __，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students. As we all know, smoking does harm of human beings. More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes many illness. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is waste of money. What's worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
It is common phenomenon (现象)nowadays what there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on the road. What’s worse, many people always litters here and there in the streets, that makes me concerned. I have some specific ideas to share when it comes to handle these problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever I’m on my way to home. First and foremost, never will I crossed a road until the traffic light turns green. Secondly, I will always use the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw rubbish and spit on the road. More important, it’s necessary for everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” Therefore, let’s join hand to obey traffic rules, which will matter a lot.
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'd like take the chance for the Two-week Eco-travel Round Australia. I'm a senior two student of 17 in Xi'an. I have a great many of hobbies, such as music, drawing or playing chess. Especially I'm fond of sports and travel. That's because I'm quite strong and healthy. Australia has long been my dream countries to visit. There're plenty of interesting plants and animals in that magic country, which were what I want to learn personal. The travel will for sure help increase my knowledge of protect the environment and broaden your horizons. It may be very tired, but I still apply for the travel.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once I was praised because I did something meaningful on my pocket money. One day, I happened to knowing some students in a far-away school were hungry for knowledges because they didn’t have enough books. I decide to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved it, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents was very happy and praised me great when they heard about it. They said I did good thing. I believe that every little bit makes a different. I will continue to help those which are in trouble.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About a year before, I pulled into CC Mall do some shopping. I found a shopping cart what was in the parking space next to my car, and saw a purse in it. I didn’t know who it was belonged to. I opened the purse and went through the cards with no lucky of finding something but a woman’s name, and then I found the address on the top of her check. I drove 15 miles to this lady’s house and knock at the door. No one was home at that time, so I left a note with my phone number on it. She eventually called me and we arranged the appointment. While I got to her house, she offered me dinner and all the money in her purse, but I mustn’t accept it. I told her that it was the right thing to do.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Denim, that is used to making jeans(牛仔裤), is a kind of cloth of cotton(棉花). Denim is strongly enough, so after many wears and washes, jeans can still be in good condition. But during the process, in whom jeans are made，the environment is polluted, but workers’ health are affected because harmful chemicals. Now people are working on solution. To reduce the bad effects, some companies recommend wash jeans every each 10 wears. And, when possible, air dry them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students are even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
