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Dear Lily,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation! Knowing that you’re amazing at traditional China, I’d like to recommend my most favourite city, Suzhou to you.
Suzhou, referring as the Venice of the East, is an attractively city located in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It had been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. The Classical Gardens are the symbol of the city, there you can have better understanding of China. Because these gardens are not large, they’re unique to their designs. It bring together the beauty of nature, architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours,
Lihua
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Among all the cities in China, I love my hometown best. Locating in the southwest of China, it has a mild climate and fantastic natural sceneries. It’s neither too hot or too cold and beautiful plants can be found everywhere. But it’s not the natural beauty that attracted me most. That I like best is the architecture here. Compared with other cities, there aren’t a good many of high-rise buildings here. Besides, you can find varieties of classical Chinese buildings, which remind people about the past and create relaxed atmosphere. Also, the friendly people and delicious food here adds its charm. As a local student, I really feel fortunately to live in this city.
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Chengdu is known for a “laid-back” city. A relaxing teahouse culture and a lively nightlife that mix beer bars and Sichuan opera shows contribute to their unique charm. Hundreds of Sichuan dishes and spicy hotpots sure impress visitors. If lucky enough, one can see mountains cover by snow from the city even in summer, which is one of the most amazing sight there. The city increased green space since 2009 as a result of an air pollution. With over 10 million tourists visit the city every year, Chengdu has so much to offer. Unless you have time, you may go there to explore it by yourself.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’d love to share with you my personally opinions on city life and life in small towns. I grow up in a small town and then moved to a big city at 18, so I have experienced the good and bad side of both. I never thought that I would enjoy live in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten years of living on one, I can’t imagine ever living in a small town again. Surely small towns and big cities all have some problems in terms of transport. In a small town, you have to own a car make life comfortable. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensive parking, but there you have a choice of taking public transport, which is cheap than driving. I can always enjoy a lot of films, concerts, and another wonderful shows. However, these things are not rare in small towns.
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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How have you been lately? You said you want to know about the Great Wall. I’m happily to tell you about them here. The Great Wall was build more than two thousand years ago. It is 8,851.8 kilometers long, six to seven meters high but four to five meters wide. The Great Wall, that represents the long history of China, is great wonder created to protect the ancient Chinese people. Now the Great Wall have become one of the most famous attractions in China, and it attracts a large number of visitor from all around the world each year.
I hope you can come to China to visit the Great Wall on one day. I’m sure you will love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
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Pu’er is the hometown of Pu’er Tea. In Pu’er, there is ancient tea trees with the history of more than 1,000 years. Beside, the city has 3.25 million mu of tea gardens, included modern tea gardens, ancient tea trees and tea tree forests.
Between a variety of tea leaves,Pu’er Tea is known to be a “curio” (珍品) that we can drink it for its unique taste and special health care functions.
In recent year,Pu’er Municipal Party Committee has carrying out the “scientific Pu’er” plan. As a result, breakthroughs have achieved in research on other functions of Pu’er Tea. Under the help of the unique Pu’er Tea, Pu’er City has produced a beautiful business card.
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Dear Steven,
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answer them.
To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Liu Chao
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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How have you been lately? You said you wanted to know about the Great Wall. I’m happily to tell you about them here. The Great Wall built more than two thousand years ago. It is 8,851.8 kilometers long, six to seven meters high but four to five meters wide. The Great Wall, that represents the long history of China, is a great wonder creating to protect the ancient Chinese people. Now the Great Wall has became one of the most famous attraction in China, and it attracts the large number of visitors from all around the world each year.
I hope you can come to China to visit the Great Wall on one day. I’m sure you will love it.
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
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2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It had a long history of more than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of stones and bricks, and that all the construction was done by hand. As it was used to protecting the country from foreign invaders, every a few hundred meters along the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as a symbol of China, the Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attraction in the world. There is no wonder that the Great Wall attracts thousands foreign tourists every year.