增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I met a young student, that came from the USA, in the Palace Museum. It was first time that I had met a foreigner, so I went to greet him with English. He told me that he was a college student traveling in China and he likes China very much. I offered to show him around to the museum. He was impressing by the Chinese culture and busy taking photo all the time. He said he hadn’t seen such beauty buildings before. After that, we went boating and had a good time together. I was very glad to having the chance to share our culture with a foreigner and practice his spoken English as well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On a sunny morning, Tom’s mom drove him to a farm to let him experience of country life. Tom had never visited a farm before, so he was filled with excitements when finally seeing one. It was a beauty farm, where Tom and his mom were welcoming by a friendly farmer. Tom first visited the farmland but learned about the crops grown there. Then he picked apples with his mom happy. Later, following the guidance, Tom feed some sheep and learned how to riding a horse. On that day, Tom quite enjoyed him. He wished for another visit to the farm in near future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am fond the summer holiday. Last summer, I go to Hawaii for my holiday. I often had a walk along the beach after the supper or had a swim in the afternoon. They sky was blue, and the air was fresher. Whenever you went, you could saw the green trees and the colorful flowers. The food in Hawaii was delicious and the people was friendly, too. The holiday was really wonder. I will never forget the days when I spent in Hawaii. I enjoy travel across the world. I hope I can meet different people and visit different place of interest some day in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How have you been lately? You said you want to know about the Great Wall. I’m happily to tell you about them here. The Great Wall was build more than two thousand years ago. It is 8,851.8 kilometers long, six to seven meters high but four to five meters wide. The Great Wall, that represents the long history of China, is great wonder created to protect the ancient Chinese people. Now the Great Wall have become one of the most famous attractions in China, and it attracts a large number of visitor from all around the world each year.
I hope you can come to China to visit the Great Wall on one day. I’m sure you will love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：再错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When I was young I want to become a traveler, so I really liked reading books which were introduced Many countries. They are so many places where I want to go, but if I must choose only one place, my choose is Morocco. There are three reasons why the Morocco is my favorite place. Firstly, Morocco is country in North African. I have never been to African, and I think there are many mysteries on this land than Asia or Europe. Secondly, Morocco is a famous place where many movies was made, such as ‘Casablanca’. Morocco had many nice places for sightseeing. Lastly, Morocco is much developing in business. I like all developed cities, besides they are always full of life. When I think over Casablanca or New York or other cities like them, I just feel very excitedly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. She has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer and he is work for a big firm now. He has already visited a greatly number of different place in Australia. He has just bought Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the central of Australia. He will soon visit to Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I am ten years old, I went to Dali with two Americans. I became their guide. First, we went to the Erhai Lake. They wanted to look around the lake by the boat. After buy the tickets, we got into a boat. We went around, seeing the beautiful sight. After that, we went shopping. The sellers couldn’t spoke English. Though it was very hardly, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some little things with their help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Peter likes experiencing different cultures. Last month, he had a tour Beijing. To make full use of his limited time, he made a list of places of interests he wanted to see. The Forbidden City was her first destination. There were such many palaces that Peter even lost his way. The grand palaces were left a deep impression on Peter. Then he went to the National Museum, where got thousands of objects displaying. The next day, Peter watched Beijing Opera in a traditionally tea-house. What excited he was! He said that he had fallen in love to Chinese culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(＿)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, a famous star has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I have much suggestions to solve this problem.
First, make more posters inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behavior. Also, I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
