增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（⁄）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day, I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. So he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone has many first-time experience and so do I. Now I’d like share with you the first time I tried cooking by myself. One Sunday my parents go out. I felt hungry at the noon, so I decided to cook for myself. I tried to cook some vegetables, so the pot caught fire where I put some oil into it. Lucky, my mother came back and helped me put off the fire. Although my first cooking did not success, I felt proud of myself. It was the start of try something new. Now I’ve become quite a good cook.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At present, only a few students read after class. The reason are as follows: Firstly, some students are such busy that they don’t have time to do reading because teachers leave us too much homework. Secondly, some of them don’t attach importance to read at all in their spare time. Worst of all, some students were not likely to read since they spend lots of time watching TV and surfing Internet. I feel it’s a pity because books are the main source of knowledge. When you feel disappointing, reading is a good way to comfort yourself. Additional, books can take us to where we can’t really go to. Anyway, once you stick with reading, you’ll get benefits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was very glad to have an excellent chance to visit and studied in Beijing last year. It is one of largest and most attractive city in the world. It offers visitors thousands of things to do, included visiting museums, beautiful parks but historical sites. I soon fell in love to Beijing because of their rich culture and history. I liked having a cup of black tea and walking along the river in the afternoon.
More important, people in Beijing were so friendly that they were always kindly helped me whenever I was in trouble. I will never forget my interested days in Beijing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Music and songs play important part in our daily life. For example, they can bring us not only pleasant but also happiness. Besides, they can help us improve our study. I was fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music brings me into a beautiful world in where I am loved and cared for by Grandma. What’s more, they often make me think of my wonderfully childhood which was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the games played with my young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten. So I have to say I can’t thank music very much.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, our family paid visit to Shuihu Town. There were so many people in the Shuihu Town, among who were some foreign tourist. I went up to them, said hello but introduced Shuihu culture to them. They were very interested and thanked us. At noon, we had a quick meal. In the afternoon, just before we left, I found a boy cry alone. So I asked him what happened and take him to the manager’s office. Under the help of the manager, the boy had found his parents at last. Though I was tired, I felt very happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The Forbidden City, that has been closed to the public for two months, is still a place worth pay a visit to.
Once the area of emperors or the royal court, the Forbidden City celebrates its 600th birthday in this year. The palace, building in 1420, recorded lives of important people through various relic and documents. The museum can provide a large amount of valuable material for today's historical research, so well as inspiration for literature and entertainment.
Apart from giving people glimpse of history, the Forbidden City is also creatively in terms of marketing. Over the last decade, the museum had produced more than 10. 000 cultural products.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday my friend Wang Peng and I went to watch a basketball game, that proved to be a meaningful experience. On the way to the gym, we noticed a disabled man struggle to push his wheelchair onto a bridge. At a sight of this, Wang Peng and I rushed forward and extended our helping hands with hesitation. Wang Peng tried hard drag and push the wheelchair while I kept the disabled man steadily in the wheelchair. After we crossed the bridge, the sweat flowed down my cheek. The disabled man offered our sincere thanks to us. When we reached the gym, the game had already been begun, but we didn't feel regretful for what we have done.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently there was an organized activity with the theme of ‘Human Activities and Wildlife Protection’ in the science museum. I participated in it with some of my classmates in this afternoon. From the activity, I learned that at present the environment is being destroyed because of people’s harmful activities, what causes a decrease of wildlife. Beside, many people hunt wild animals for their meat and sometime, for money. To make matters bad, in response, the decrease is doing harm to people’s life. So there is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing law to raise the awareness of wildlife protection. Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is protect ourselves. All in all, I have benefit a lot from today’s activity.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Dear fellow students,
There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food because they contain too a lot of fat and sugar. Eating too much snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What’s more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.
Let’s form good eating habits and say not to snacks.
