The person I admire most is my father. Strict while he may be,he never fails to show his care and consideration. Once I carelessly broke a neighbor’s window while played football in the street. Seen nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad comes home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me that had happened. I could only tell him the truth. Rather than scold me,he praised me for my honest and encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor. Later that day, I went to the neighbor’s house. I told him the truth and apologized to my fault, promising fix his window. I realized that not only do Dad take care of our health but he also teaches us how to be good citizen.
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My bicycle went wrong again. Tired with repairing it again and again, I decide to buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack.
The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked such cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeeper told us that it was the lately bicycle. He wanted to charge me 800 yuan, that was too expensive for me. I just couldn’t afford for such an expensive one. Then I chose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, and it was much better than the old one.
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Bad eating habits can destroy our health. Lots of diseases occur because bad eating habits. There are lots of bad eating habits in our life.
For example, watching television while have meals is bad for our health. Doing this meant you don’t pay attention to your food, forget how fully you are, and often eat too much. Another example is having drinks rather than water. Soft drinks and fruit juice is usually high in calorie and sugar, what, therefore, can cause weight problems. Water is important in making your brain cell and every organ in your body work properly. Beside, eat in front of the computer and staying there after meals may also do harm with our health. For our health, we should rid both of these bad eating habits.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my friend Jim and I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me a deep impression. To avoid wasting time queue up for the tickets, we tried making reservations online. It just tookus several minute to book the tickets successful. The next day’s visit amazed us. While wandering around the galleries, we attracted by the delicate chinaware. To our excitement, they could scan the QR code to listen to the introduction which give us a deeper understanding of the history. In the afternoon, we had an unique experience in the VR theatre. After the visit, I found the Forbidden City both tradition and modern because of our rich history was made alive here!
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I feel proudly knowing your interest in Chinese literature. The phrase you asked for me means trying to help young plants grow by pull them up.
Once man was anxious about the slow grow of his young plants. One day, he goes to the field and pulled them up one by one. He came back tired and said to her family, “I’m exhausted today, for I have helped the young plants grow much tall at once.” Heard this, his son ran to look at them. To his horror, all of them had dried up and died.
This phrase means what growing against the law of development will make things worse.
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(2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第l1处起)不计分。
Dear Ms Wood,
I’m Li Hua, one of your student in China. It’s almost a year before you left us. We all miss you and are very gratefully for what you did for us. The other day our school hold an English speech competition and I won first prize. What’s worse, it again reminded me all your kind help. Yesterday we went to water the trees planting on the hill behind the school. The tree you planted is growing good, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood in our honor.
We are eager to know more about you. Hope to keep in the close touch with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Joseph,
There will be a lecture on a history of the Emperor Palace giving by Professor Ramksy in the lecture hall at 3:00 tomorrow afternoon. If you are interest in the lecture, and please arrive at the hall half an hour in advance. The lecture hall was not far from your hotel. You may walk there, that will take you only a few minutes. When you go out the hotel, turn left and walk straightly down the street until you come to a traffic light. Take a right turn there, walk two crossing, and you will see a post office on your left. The lecture hall is next to them.
See you tomorrow afternoon.
Yours truly,
Bryn Johnson
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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧weekend with you. Luckily the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in am on Friday evening. |
Dear Visitors,
Welcome to Hangzhou. Hangzhou is a beautiful city famous for her West Lake. As the number of visitors increasing year by year, we are sorry to see empty bottles and plastic bags floated on the lake, and even flowers picked up and trees destroyed, which does harm to the image of the city. I must appeal to everyone to behave properly. Here and now I strongly suggest:
First, strengthen the environment-protecting awareness of the people who throws rubbish here and there habitual. Second, it’ high time that the government takes further measures to protect the beauty of West Lake such as placing good-looking dustbins at visitors’ convenience. Third, be a volunteers to beautify the lake now and then, but I believe with the joint efforts of everyone there will exist forever the saying “up above is paradise and down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou”.
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注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekends I watched a film, 13 Going on 30. The story is about an 13-year-old girl who is eager to be an adult. She hopes she can have a beautiful face but a perfect body shape. She wants to date some handsome guy she likes. Then the magical thing happens in, and she gets everything. But she feels confusing, because her life changes total. I had the same feeling as the girl when she was at her age. But now, when I looked back on it, I think we should value what we have. Every stage of life have its happiness, so there is no need skip any stage.
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Be an excellent student with all-round development, Li Hua has been honored as Star of all the subjects but often ranks among the top three in the class. After class, she is active in the playground, music club and some community. The sport he likes most is playing the basketball. He also took great delight in Chinese opera as well singing pop songs. Besides, he takes an actively part in all sorts of social practices. In a word, Li Hua is an outstanding student, which has set a good example to us.