增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jimmy. I’m writing to recommend me as a candidate for the chairman of the English drama club. Equipping with fluent English and a good knowledge of drama, I have no difficulty communicating with others in English. I know exact what is expected of a leader of the club but I’m experienced in cooperating. In addition of, I’ve been working in student organizations for while, so I’m quite familiar to the daily routines. Last but not least, I’m enthusiastic about drama and eager to take responsibility for a reliable chairman, contributing to the prosper of English drama. Should I have the opportunity to serve the club, I will lead it to the best of my ability.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
World Wetlands Day, celebrating annually on 2 February, aims to increase aware and understanding of the importance of wetlands to humans and the globe. It also spreads information about what valuable wetlands are and encourages individuals and governments to take actions to prevent their loss. The day was first organized by a group of environmentalist who wanted to celebrate and protect wetlands.
Wetlands are ecosystems which water is the primary factor controlling the environment and the associated plant and animal life. Wetlands are disappearing at a rate three times fast than forests, making them the Earth’s most threatened ecosystems. Human activities, such as agriculture development, urbanization, pollution, overfishing and climate change, have contributed the loss of wetlands.
Actions needed to save the world’s wetlands from disappearing and restore those we have already lost. That’s because of wetlands provide critical habitats for a vast variety of wildlife, offering valuable opportunities for outdoor recreation, and play a crucial role in flood control.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
This summer I take a trip to the undersea world, which turned out extreme fantastic.
The first thing I became aware was all the vivid colors surrounding me. Seeing so extraordinary beauty, I found my heart beat wildly and every cell in my body waking up. I began to explore the fantastic coral. Suddenly, I caught a sight of an eel (鳗鱼) with its heads showing from a hole watching for tasty food. I felt scared to death but fled away. However, when I looked down into the deep of the ocean, I felt like discovering a whole new dimension of life.
Exposing to such deep clear water, I found my trip awesome!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。句意:
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。句意:
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How are you doing these days? Yesterday, my class has had a discussion about how to lead a low-carbon life. I was impressing by some of the ideas and would like to share them to you.
In the meeting, we shared various tip for leading a low-carbon life. It turns out that adopting a greener lifestyle is not difficult at all. For example, we can get into the habit of turning on lights and taps when not use them. You can also use reusable cloth bags when we shop. In additional, we can make fashionable to use handkerchiefs instead of tissues.
How does your country promote low-carbon lifestyles and encourage people to protect an environment? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping was having an environmental protection activity near the rivers when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. I think it`s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect to nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Late in the evening I was walking in the park. Suddenly I heard screams coming from behind the bushes. I stopped listening and understood that a girl attacked. I heard sounds of fighting. For several moments I was hesitating that I should get involved, but I was frightened and worried about my own safe.
Then I realized that the girl’s voice became more weaker, so I knew I had to act quickly. The next moment, I ran behind the bushes and pulled the attacker off the girl. We fell to the ground and fought with each other for several minute. Then the attacker jumped up and ran away.
Breathing hardly, I slowly came up to the girl. It was dark, but I could not see her face clearly. I felt that she was very frightened. I told her she is safe now. After a few seconds I heard her words with the great surprise in her voice. And then I realized that the girl was my youngest daughter.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students are worshipping stars so blind that they don’t care about how the stars do. It is really a pity that some fans lose them in the process.
Here are some suggestions giving to the fans. Firstly, please worship stars sensibly. Never try to do some stupid and even crazy things for our stars. Next, be aware of a most important task of a student. Everyone is supposed to studying hard at present. Last but not least, why not to worship the stars around us? There are some super stars we can communicate in reality, such as our parent and the medical workers.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled of great anxiety. However, I couldn’t be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approach me and said, “In life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you,but turn them into motivation (动力) to inspire you.” Her words was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life. Finally, I gained what I deserved.
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine what keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our class organized the outdoor activity last Sunday. Forty students participated in them. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Fu Mountain and set out for the top in high spirit. Along the way, we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When someone fell behind, and a few students would walk back to offering help. About two hours late, we all reached the top. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with greatly joy.
We benefited a lot of the activity. Not only it get us close to nature and reduce our stress, but it also promoted the friendship among us.