1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays in China, either in the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly woman, will gather in squares to dance with popular music. More and more young people are also participating the square dance now.
There are many reasons for their popularity. First of all, China has made a great progress in the social and economic development in the past decades, and people had more time and energy to enjoy their life. Therefore, doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.
However, dancers play loud music and take up lots of public places, where makes many people annoying. It is time that square dancers make some change.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As you know, the UN is a international organization made up of countries want to promote world peace. The UN touches the lives of people in everywhere. The organization are helping end some of the world’s most horribly conflicts. The UN does not have their own army. Instead, it borrows soldiers from different countries belonged to the UN. Under the help of these armies and other worth organizations, the UN assists the victims of wars and disasters. In addition, the UN helps protect human rights and works to improve international laws, for example, those on child labour and on equal rights for minority and women.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother Julian，a fan of Yao Ming，is good at playing basketball.
As a boy，he was committed to practise it. Sometimes he even invited me to play for him，and often he defeats me. After going to middle school，he was chosen captain of the school team，it really made him very proud. They were even won a few championships. His teammates all considered himself to be a friendly and skillfully player.
Now he is learning business administration in famous university in Germany. Look back on the past，he still thinks of playing basketball as one of his favorite hobby in his life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Has anybody ever told you that you shouldn't sneeze（打喷嚏）with your eyes open and your eyeballs will pop out？This might sound reasonable，because our eyelids（眼皮）always close when we sneeze. But is that true？
Actually，this is highly likely. Although a sneeze can burst from your nose in a speed of 320 kilometers per hour，it can't transfer（转移）that pressure to your eyes. Plus，there's no muscle directly behind the eye what could push the eyeballs outward. Thus，your eyelids don't have much muscle power，so even if they are responsible for keeping your eyeballs in place，they would fail.
But then why do we always close our eyes when we sneeze？It's simple a reflex（反射）of the body，just like how our legs kick when our knees tapped. The nose and eyes are linked by nerves. so the stimulation（刺激）from the sneeze travel up one nerve to the brain then down another nerve to the eyelids，cause a blink（眨眼）for most people. It's just an involuntary reaction with no real purpose.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I would like to have a smart robot that can do plenty of the things for me. For example, it can clean my room and make the bed, keeps everything in order. I hope it will be programmed to do homeworks without making mistakes. In that way, I can turn to it wherever I need help with my study. Beside, it can take care of my little brother, who often bothered me much. Then I can have more free time to do what I’m fond. It doesn’t matter much whether it is shaped like, but it must be able to communicate with me and understand its feelings. How wonderfully life will become with such a magic robot!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of asking whether that we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our math teacher, Mr. Alex offered us an answer of a difficult math problem in class. Because the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Think that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and try to work it out in a different way. Half a hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to her, the teacher praised me for my independently thinking.
From this experience, I have been learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helping us to seek the truth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The radio club in our school was started two years before. One day, I just begin thinking about music for everyone, so I asked the headmaster that music could be played during break times. He approved an idea, but two years later I am in charge of the radio club as the oldest student member.
Our club is much more as just music. Every morning we tell students about the weather, recently news, and some special messages that the teachers want us to broadcast them.
When parents come to visit the school and talk to the teachers, we often play song sung by students, and we also give special messages to inform the parents events such as outings and school plays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（____），并在该词下面写出修饰后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分。
Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat. Now I would like tell you something about it. Locating in the north of the city, this Residential Center is small with only six building. My flat, which covers the area of 36 square meters, is in the fourth floor. It consisted of a sitting room, a bedroom, a kitchen and a toilet. When you enter into the flat, you will find yourself in the sitting room. The sitting room is the part that I like best, because it is brightly with a lovely balcony(阳台), which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below. Although my flat is small, I like them very much because it is comfortable.
Best regards,
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
David McConnell sold books door-to-door. Housewives were not interested in the books and frequently slammed the door (关门，拒绝) in McConnell's face after he had a chance to make his sale. Instead of being discouraging, McConnell decided to give off a free gift, a small vial (小瓶) of perfume, by which he made himself. He soon discovered that the women prefer the perfume to the books. He stopped selling books and creating his own company Avon, which is success.
When you do nothing, you learn nothing. And when you try and fail, you learn what doesn't work. That puts you one step close to what will work. It is not failure itself but the attitude we have toward it matters.
