增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Collecting stamps are my favorite, which benefits me a great deal of. For me, a stamp is not a piece of paper merely , and a record of history. A stamp tells me about the time, place and country of their origin. In my spare time, I always arrange the stamps and sticking them properly in an album. Now I have three albums of stamps, which I looked after carefully. I enjoy the beautiful of these stamps. I come know about the history, geography, and culture of a country from the stamps. I am proudly of myself to be in love with the hobbies.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Father's Day is coming. At first, that I want to do is to buy a bunch of flowers for my dad to express my thank for his hard work to bring me up a little card will be attached with the flowers, said "Happy Father's Day!" Considering that my dad is busy with his work that he often forgets to do exercise, I intended to accompany him to work out in the nearest gym from our home after the meal. As far as I know, the gym is well equipping and offers service of highly quality. After returning back home, I shall read the letter I write in advance to her.
I hope my dad will have a happy Father's Day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old freshman. I am very interest in the position in your poster. So I’m writing to recommend me to you as a member of the school TV station.
When in senior high school, I am once a journalist of the school newspaper. That is why I’m good at writing now. The reports writing by me are often praised by many of her fellow classmates and teachers. In addition, working as a journalist help me to grow as a outgoing, independent, and sociable person. More importantly, I am so curious and enthusiastic about is happening in and around our campus that I can keep it up with the latest events. I’m sure I will devote myself to working in the school TV station whole-hearted.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Senses play important role in our daily lives. Sometimes, the five senses that we have effect one another. When one of the senses fails, other senses become more stronger. For example, blind people can read and write by Braille, a system with patterns of six raised dots represent each letter. Besides, they could get across the road without help in a foggy day.
In fact, scientists have observed what we are more possible to be healthier if we make the most of our senses. Fortunately, our sense of sight is used too much while our senses of touch and smell have been ignored. So it is strongly suggested that one develops his all five senses.