增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限—词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11 处起) 不计分。
As we all know, being a teacher is not easy job. A teacher who has to play too many roles like an educator, a guide, a conductor, a director and sometimes a parent, either! We all have at least one favorite teacher more like a friend to us in our lives, but we are always sincerely grateful to them for all the love and guidance. The hard work, time and patience that teachers devote with students, without doubt, is beyond compare. They are simply strong pillars behind building any nation. They work tireless without any complaint to enrich the lives of on-going generations. To acknowledge the amazed value of their efforts, we are supposed to send them special cards or gifts on their graduation day. In this way, we would be able to deliver our thanks to those inspirational teacher in the most beautiful manner.
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Of all my teachers, Mr. Jenkins is the one which impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teacher in our school. Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Jenkins pays more attention to his ways of teaching He tries various of ways to make his classes lively and interestingly. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, and also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he inspired us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With her help, we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems. Even the students who previously lacked confidence now take active part in his class. We all appreciate that he has done for us.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of economy, I have to face variey pressures. I don’t have enough time of attend to the old in my family. In order to reduce the pressure, I want the household robot to help me in the future.
I hope the household robot can take care of the old. It can cook meals at a fixing time, that can be adjusted according to individual needs. It can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing the exercise. Beside, it can deal with emergencies. For example, if an old man fall ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors of help. It can help me to do some cleaning.
I think it would be great help for me if I own such a robot and I will live comfortable.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改1处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the continuous improvement of our living conditions, most people can now enjoy a longer life. However, more and more old people are suffering from loneliness, what is one of the major problems in today society. To make old people live off better, some good advice must be following. Firstly, the young should visit their elderly parents regular and communicate with them often, so as reduce their parents’ loneliness. Secondly, the old ought to understand a stress and pressure facing young people, especially the one working in big cities. Furthermore, more activities were supposed to be organized for the old, or they can make more friends and have more joy in their later life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To enrich the residents’ lives, our community organized the activity last Saturday. It was about making zongzi. About two hundred people took part in the activity. Men and women, old and young, all show great interest in it. When we were arrived, we saw some long tables in a row with rice and bamboo leaves on it. Under a teacher’s guidance, we made zongzi one after another careful. In the end, we were allowed take zongzi home. Having ate zongzi made by ourselves, I had a feeling of prides. There is no doubt whether labor is the most glorious. Only by work hard can we achieve real happiness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处, 多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
This was my first time to participate the summer camp in Beijing University. In the morning, we took part in the opening ceremony. There were more than four hundred of students attending this summer camp. I feel very happy because I knew I could make more friends with sharing interest in this beautiful city. Then we began our first exam, that turned out very challenging.
Our headteacher was an exchanged student from Australia. He would be our teacher for twenty days. I thought we would be on good term with him since he was very friendly and humorously. And he was handsome, too. In her class, he told us what we were expected to do and each of us were invited to make a self-introduction.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m especial crazy about space. I want to be a man like Ivan Star, an astronaut, whom has been to space three times. I remember it was a third Tuesday of January, when it was freezing cold, but I felt warm because of the hot star, Ivan Star, visited my town. He came to my university give a talk. First, he talked about the stars or the planets in space. Ivan looked really handsome and strong, and was of medium height, wear a tie. At the end of the talk, he gave a few photo of himself and other astronauts in the spaceship to some of them. I was really lucky that day because I get one.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exists some potential problems if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ˄), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day we had a questionnaire in Mr. Robin’s class. The last question was: “What is the name of the woman who cleans the school regular?” It was some kind of joke, huh? I have seen the cleaning woman several times before. She was probably in her fifty, with long and dark hair. And how would I know her name? I handed in my paper with the last question not answering. Before class ended, Mr. Robin said, “You’ll encounter with many people in the future, they are all significant.” He continued, “They deserve your attention, even if all you do are smile and say hello.” What a unforgettable lesson! Afterwards I managed figure out the woman’s name: “Dorothy.”
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
l. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love doing handwork. Three days ago, I visit my uncle's small factory what produced Chinese traditional carpets. I found it hard and more dangerous than I had thought. Workers used knives, scissors and other tool. With my uncle's permission, I gave it try. When I did it, the knife was very much close to my hand, so I had to be carefully. I did the same thing again and again. But it took me a lot of patience. It's easier said than did. I think my uncle is great and she is my good example.