增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirty and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the saying goes, chances preferred the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Lucky, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing the volleyball every day. When another tryout arrived, I was fully prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a younger sister and his name is Xiaomei. She is a youngest member of my family. She was small, but she is the most important member of my family. Everyone love her a lot. Xiaomei is a very much good student. She is in the second grade, but she is so smart. She can learning anything very quickly. She often likes to go the kitchen to help Mom with the cooking. She loves dancing and singing song. She always fills the entirely house with laughter. She is the treasure of my family.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 / 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. They decorated the room in flowers and paintings.
2. There are two new hotels near here under construct.
3. Not only the students but also their teacher are enjoying the beautiful scenery of West Lake.
4. He closed the window so as keep warm.
5. The reason why he was late was because he missed the train this morning.
6. To be honestly, I love the picture very much.
7. I saw the little boy cry there.
8. We don’t permit smoke in the office.
9. I would stay at home rather than to go outside.
10. It is typically of him to keep others waiting.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Summer camp is an essential part of school life, which is aimed at ensuring a child overall development. When in Senior 2, I sign up for a summer camp organized by our school, whose theme was “Culture”. There were various activities to choose and we learned several cultures in deep. At the end of the camp, we were asked to share that we had learned with everyone. That was so an interesting activity as we were able to listen to different opinion. The teachers in the charge of the camp also shared their views, make a deep impression on us. The camp was short, and it was enjoyable and educational.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A men asked Socrates the secret to success and Socrates asked him walk with him to a river. When in the middle of a river, Socrates ducked him into the water all for a sudden. The man struggled to get out but was failed and started turning blue. On seeing this, Socrates pulled him out of the water but the man took a deep breath of air immediately. Socrates asked that he wanted the most just now, the man reply, "Air." Socrates said, "That’s the secret! When you want success as bad as you wanted the air, you will get it. There is no others secret.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A few days ago, my grandfather moved in to live with us. At first, I was full of idea about what it was going to like. We would take him to the senior center for lunch and he would make friends with there. However, Granddaddy Bill refuses to even go outside, much more to the senior center. He was simply exciting to just have somebody to talk to and watch television with. Then I realized being a good caregiver meant dropping my own judgments about that it should be, and focus instead on his needs. Once I understood what was real important to him, he was able to spend his last years living the life he wanted, in a way he wanted.
1. My daughter, Jane, never dreamed receiving a letter from a girl of her own age in Holland.
2. Everybody says I must be mad and they are probable right.
3. 'Well,' I said to the manager, 'there is still some honest in this world!’
4. Work on it had been begun before my sister left.
5. A girl came in and put a envelope on his desk.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I lived in Germany, I decided to go shopping one day, and I drive into downtown. I was very pleased because of I found a parking space immediately. It was rather unusual. I did my shopping, that only took half an hour and I went back to my car. To my greatly surprise, it was no longer on ground but it was in the air. I really did not know what to do at that point but I went to the police station. The policeman were very kind to me. They told me I parked at the entrance to the car park and as a result, everybody could get out of the car park. Then I wanted to laugh and cried at the same time. It made me embarrassing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in primary school, I always look forward to the coming of Children’s Day, what attracted kids’ enthusiasm. I enjoyed have fun with my classmates. Usually the teacher prepared some funny games for us, such as playing the ping pong and guessing riddles. If we won the game once, the teacher would give them some candies as the prizes. Whomever received the most candies would be the winner. Extreme interested in guessing riddles, I focused my attention the riddles and figured out the most answer. When the teacher announced I was the winner, I was so pride of myself.
