注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, we were eating an early dinner after suddenly it rained heavily outside. And then we received a special delivery. We found poor dog sitting in front of our gate. My husband brought it into the house. It stayed calmly as we dried it with a towel. I named it was Pumpkin. We liked it very much and let it sleeping with us.
For the first time in my life, I have a dog of my own. Pumpkin’s appear helped me in some ways. It taught me what this meant to be responsible of another life. It also made me overcome its fear of animals.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hardly has the summer vacation begun when I returned to my native town. As the second-year senior student I had to get myself prepare for the college entrance examinations which were only a year away. Therefore in the morning I reviewed my lesson and read newspapers. In the afternoon, sometimes I went swimming on the river. Actual I like swimming and think nothing is refreshing than a swim. While it was hot in the afternoon, but a swim with friends would always make myself energetic. At night I always stayed at home, watched television with my family.I went to bed when the clock on the wall struck ten.
