增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
I fell in love flower gardening after a school assignment. To me, it is not only relaxing but also educationally. I had experienced lots of successes and failures in growing flowers, making me realize failure is a normal part of life that lead to improvement and success. When I’m in low spirit, I often go to see how is going on in the pots. Watch things grow makes me feel at peace. He also reminds me that life is not a race but the most precious moment is now. Besides, I usually listen to books while are tending to my plants, killing two birds with one stone.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I’ve always had a passion for the medical field. When I was a little kid, I used to wearing a lab coat but run around with my first-aid box. Acting like a professional, I find it fun then. Later, I wanted to be nurse when I witnessed what considerate the nurses were while they were looking after my sick father. During that difficult time, the nurses were the one who interacted with us most and provided for the best care. I was deeply impressing by the difference those nurses made to my father life. Therefore, I’m now determined to pursue that career and work hardly to help others.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Football is my favorite sport. I usual play football with my friends after school and join competitions. I have benefited a lot from play football. It helps me keep health and provides me with a way to relax me during stressful school days. Beside, I’ve become braver when facing challenges. It also teaches me good teamwork is the key to success and it has been brought me many friends with a same interest. Therefore, I suggest teenager do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose something what suits us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like to go running early in the morning before the breakfast. I am very happy when I try running and listen to a book on my iPod at the same time. I get lost on the story and forget that I am running. I always run long than I expected because I like listening to the story so much.
I also listen to a book on my iPod while I was riding the bus to school. I never read a book on the bus because it make me feel sick. So listening to a book on the bus does not make me sickness. I just look out of window and forget all about the people around us.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone. We’re senior three students now, and it’s time that every one of us starts considering what to do after our graduation. As the rapid development of our society, there are more and more jobs to choose from. But which one suits us better? Some jobs may seem dull and they are vital to our society while other might appear exciting but actually they are different and bored, and sometimes cause huge pressure to those which are involved in them. As result, when we think about future career, we should realize the important of all jobs. Please remember they together to help our society function well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, my parents expected me to be a successful person with the well-paid job. However, which I valued most was a sense achievement. Since my childhood, I have dreamed of be a doctor.
The idea occurred to me for the first time when I see my grandfather suffer from a severe headache. I thought if I were a doctor, I would ease his pain. Then as I grew up, I came across Lin Qiaozhi’s story. It was her determination and selfless devote that strengthened my decision. Why not carry on her career? Undoubted, becoming a qualified doctor is not far from easy. I will study hard and made non-stop efforts to pursue her dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, the student at Chenguang High School. Heard that you are coming to our school to give us a lecture about Western music, I’m more than delightful.
Western music is that I like most. The reason why I love Western music is that the piece of music naming Fate Symphony by Beethoven inspired me a lot to move on when I am in difficulty. I hold the firmly belief that it also has given some other motivation of life and study. In addition to, the story that Beethoven continued composing after he went deaf moved me too.
Would you like to tell us anything more about him and his music?
I’m looking forward to enjoy your wonderful lecture.
Yours,
Li Jin
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What do you want to do in the future? This is question asked many times in our life, first by others then by ourselves. But the answer on it not only cannot be given immediately, but also varies with age. There are many things get an influence on our future career, included education, parents, luck or whatsoever. However, follow your heart should be taken more than serious. Beside, once you have made up your decision, be devoted to it heart and soul before life does you another favor. This way, I can save much regrets in your life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I’m greatly honouring to share with you about my opinion of further my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) at that famous university.
With history of over 2000 years, TCM is wide known for it has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness. Generations of Chinese people as well as foreigners benefit from them. I feel really pride whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather to leave the clinics with satisfaction and hope. Just like me, many classmates of mine have made up their mind to succeed traditional Chinese doctors’ career and majored in TCM to become doctors. I believe it’ll turn up an excellent cause for me to pursue.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned that the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi was a great success. But others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that Chinese dream will come true in the future. I also talk about my own dream. I have wanted to be a doctor for long time. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can help people to live a better life without their knowledge. To realize my dream, I will even work harder from now on. I must learn as much as I can to get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor. I believe diligence is that it takes to accomplish my goal.
