增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few years ago on a vacation trip, I made a video of myself dance wildly in foreign places. I put it on the Internet. Some friends started passing them around and soon millions of people watched it. I was offered money to continue my travels. And since then, I had made two more travel video that include seventy countries. Many people wanted to dance along with me, because I started inviting them to join me. People want to feel connect to each other. They want to heard and seen, and they’re curious to hear and see others from places far away. I share with that idea. It’s exactly which drives me to travel. When I dance with people, I see them smile and laugh, which makes me truly exciting.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once there was an exhibition on fine paintings in Paris. There was a curtain covered each painting. Several well-known artist were invited to visit and show their opinions. After commenting four fine paintings, they came near the fifth painting, an assistant drew the fifth curtain away. A vivid rose appear before them. At the moment an butterfly (蝴蝶) flew onto the roses in the painting. All of them cheered. They all said that it was excellence, because it confused the butterfly. Then the assistant was going to draw the 6th curtain as she did before. As soon as he touched the curtain, he cried, “Wonderful! It’s the best painting I have ever seen.”
All the artists asked that why he thought so. Before he told the reason, everybody agreed with him. The painting itself was a curtain, and the assistant was also confused, he hadn’t think it was a curtain.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Dear officer,
I am writing to extend my sincerely gratitude to you. Since the middle of August, there have been frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, caused great damage. However, the rescue work is not easy due to the uncertain of the wind.
Fortunately, you come to our rescue immediately. Professional rescue teams, armed police, fire fighting and others rescue forces spared no efforts to put off the fire. What touched me most was that the volunteers joined in the rescue work regardless of the hot weather and burning ground. That occurred to me that but for your help, Chongqing could have returned to normal so soon.
Your commitment really means a lot of to us, and I do hope to have the opportunity to repay your selfish devotion.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How are you? I’m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.
We’ll still meet at my school, but not in Saturday as usual, since I’ll have to participated in a sporting activity that day. So let’s make three o’clock on Sunday afternoon.
As you know, in order to acquire a good knowledges of Chinese, you should learn more about Chinese culture and history. Therefore, this time I would introduce Tang Poetry to you, what is of great help in learning Chinese. I advise you to learn about the briefly history of the Tang dynasty in the advance. It will surely help me learn the poems.
Look forward to hear from you soon.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A boy went to a shop and bought a pencil or other things. When he was going to pay for the bill, he took out his wallet and found he had not enough money pay. He felt awkward. At that moment, an old man whom was in charge of the shop smiled and said to the boy that he could give a rest of the money next time. The boy was so shocking, as the old man trusted him so much. When the boy went home, he remembered them all the time. So the next morning, when he passes the shop, he gave the money without hesitations. Integrity (诚信) is priceless and decide who we are.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was elected as the screenwriter and a director of our group in an activity Reading and Acting out Classics. No soon had I arrived home than I throw myself into choosing a story. The famous novel A Dream of Red Mansions popped into their head. I read the whole novel attentively but devoted myself to adapt it. It took us a lot practice to perform it. Finally came the big time which we presented it before our class with impressive acting skills and vividly lines, which turned out to be a great success.
We uploaded our video on WeChat Moments. Just several minutes later, we received many good comment.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Women’s Day. I decided to give my mother a surprise. Immediately after the school, I started to prepare dinner. It is the first time that I had cooked something on her own. Not knowing the exact procedures to cook, I read some recipe first. Keeping that I had learned in mind, I set about cook. Almost an hour later, three simple but deliciously dishes were ready on the table. No soon had everything been ready than she came back. A big smile with both surprise and satisfaction spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty dinner but the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose the bottom of my heart.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last September, a common graduation ceremony held in Henan University, and it received much attention. Xue Minxiu, born in 1937, graduated with excellent grades after worked hard for 4 years. Going to a university has always been a dream for Xue. But with some reasons, she doesn’t have the chance when she was young. Even so, she never forgot his dream. In 2014, she was accepted by Henan University and final her dream came true. Since then, Xue has been a model for the people around her. She got up at 5 o’clock every morning. Her room was filling with books and newspapers. Wherever she went to, she would take books with her. Her hard works paid off in the end.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I signed up for it with my family as soon as we hear the event Celebrate the Spring Festival to held. We had a heated discussion immediately but decided to sing a song named Song of Motherland. The next day, we began to make many preparation for our performance. Someone was very serious and hardworking to practice it. Then came the big day while our efforts paid off. The audience in the community were liked it, giving us warmly applause. In an end, we got a prize. We were really excited when receiving the souvenirs presenting by the community staff there.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Ming is a friend of mine, whom is in Senior One in No. 1 middle school. Now I’d love to introducing him in detail. I’m sure of that he will leave a deep impression on you. First, Li Ming is an outstanding boy that likes making friends. Beside, not only does he do well in his studies but he is also good at sports. You can find her either concentrating on his study in the library nor taking exercise on the playground. However, what have impressed me most is his unconditionally love for the old. Last summer vacation, he takes care of the old in a nursing home as volunteer.