增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned back home last Sunday. When I think of the wonderfully two weeks I spend in Australia, I just can’t help thinking of you. You has provided everything to make my staying here such a happy and lucky experience. I’ve learned so many, not only English and also culture. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember the fun and laughter we shared each other as well as your kind. I’ll get in touch with you and write to you often. Please take care!
Yours,
Li Ming
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dog Banner has a heart of gold. Last Sunday, she finds a sealed box in the woods with seven newborn cats inside only a day old or almost frozen to death. Banner led myself to the woods, which I took out the tiny cats one by one carefully after opening the box. I guessed someone must just abandoned them. Since that moment, Banner hasn’t left the cats and has adopted to them as if they were her own baby. She took care of them sincere. I am so happy now because of Banner. These cats will go on live their lives with loving families. I am deeply moving by my kind Banner.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, Eric! What to improve your spoken English is really a problem. I use to meet such a problem but now I speak English well. I listen to highly-quality spoken English every day and record my own speech. Play it back, I compare the pronunciation of the speakers with my and correct my wrong pronunciation. Besides, I practice speaking English in public as often as possible, which help me gain confidence and fluency. I hope these suggestions will benefit from you.
However, I have trouble in reading. But I know the meanings of most words, I can’t understand whole sentence because of some set idiom and phrases. Any good advice? I am eager for your help.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is now easier than ever to accessing the Internet, whether you are using a computer or a smartphone. There is no doubt that many young people are spending more and more time on online, with both positive and negative consequence. They can do research for their schoolwork and homework. This often help teenagers to wide their knowledge and improve their grades. However, some become addicting to online gaming and this can mean that they waste too many time playing these games. Personal, I think the Internet is such useful tool that the benefits of Internet access outweigh the dangers. In short, we should make use of the Internet in a better way to improve itself.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dr Yuan Longping is a agricultural pioneer in China.He graduates from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.Since then he has devoted himself to find ways to grow more rice.The rice farmers are now producing twice as larger harvests as before by using the kind of rice he bred.But he is not satisfied with his work.Although now he leads a rich life,but he still insists on his work to develop his rice.I think his work is real important to the world.Because of he hard work,the production of food been improved.Thanks for Yuan Longping’s research,we have more tools in the battle to rid the world of hungry.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, the number of the students in our school who skip breakfast has increased greatly. In my opinion, skip breakfast is a bad habit what should be kicked.
For one thing, breakfast offered us the energy we need for the whole morning. When you are hungry, it is hard of us to keep our mind on our studies. For another, people who skip breakfast will consume more food at noon and in the evening. Hence, the extra calories will stored in our body and make us gain weight easy.
In a short, skipping breakfast leads to poor school performance and poor health, even a bad figure. Moreover, do not skip breakfast and having a proper breakfast every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Today, when I walked to home after school, I found the sunset was very beautifully. I stopped at the park and sit on a bench to appreciate the scenery. There was so many people who had a walk at the park, most of whom were old couples. There was a special couple walk hand in hand, who caught my attention. The old woman couldn’t walk well so there was something wrong with her right legs. The old man took care of them carefully. They set good example to the young couples, showing that true love is. Against the sunset, they made up a beautiful scene.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jim is one of my close friend. Two months ago, his mother buy a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard under the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(人)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My neighbor is a generously lady in her early sixties. Since she retired as a English teacher, and she has been delivering meals to senior citizen in town. During the COVID-19 outbreak, she wasn’t able to actually get access for their homes. She begun to attach lovely cards with warm messages to those meals. It really brightened up the lives of not only those I delivered the meals to, but also those noticed the meals. Inspired by her, people in my neighborhood are willing to helping each other and more and more people, included me, have started to do voluntary work.
Five years ago, my father, who was in his forty, lost Ms job. At first, he was in low spirits and often gets drunk. One day, he read a story about Ren zhengfei, which was greatly inspired him. He turned to a friend, with which help he set up a factory. In his factory waste materials were made full use to produce environmentally friendly packing bags. With these bags well receiving, his factory went smooth. Now, he has extra money because he often helps those in need. So far, he has donated as many as $10,000. How a great father I have!
