增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a Chinese who is particular interested in Chinese Red Classic Stories, I would like to introduce the Victory over Japan Day on September 3.
September 3 is set as the memory day to celebrate the victory of the Anti-Japanese War and memorize the brave soldiers who lost their life in the war. Additionally, it was the struggle and sacrifices of that generation which saved China. So it was significant for the Chinese, especially for our teenagers. In my view, we should devote all our energies to study to prepare ourselves to build a good China. And only in this way China stand among the great powers of the world and make contributions to a world peace.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We were consider making an incredible English magazine, but with hands-on experience we didn’t know how to start it. To get professional instructions, we left for Beijing visit a chief editor of Beijing Review, a famous English journal. Although he was busier, he showed us around, explaining to us the amazed history of the journal and its producing process. Besides, he offered us lots of practical and useful informations. What makes us especially happy was that why he promised to give us continuous guidance. Filling with confidence, we are now beginning to handle my magazine.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Living a low carbon life is becoming increasing important in our modern society. It means reduce the amount of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases we released into the atmosphere. There are many simple steps we can take them. Firstly, we can choose eco-friendly modes of transportation such as walking, cycling, or using public transport instead driving. Secondly, saving energies in our homes is crucial. Switching off lights when they are not in use but using energy-efficient appliances (电器) make a significance impact. Lastly, consuming less meat and dairy products, that have a high carbon footprint, and opting for organic produce can make a different.
4 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jack set a clear goal to be a lawyer to protecting the fairness and justice of his motherland. After entering university, he makes a detailed plan. Every summer vacation saw Jack do various part-time job. He was employing in doing some volunteer work in a local library. He also acquired with all the certificates connect with his major. With impressive perform, he was high thought of by all the employers. He finally got an ideal job as a lawyer in her hometown. In order to become outstanding lawyer in the future, he is working hard now.
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist who can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing anything. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for the first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I flew back to New York from a spring break. My flight landed lately in the evening. I decided to taking an airport bus to the downtown area so that I could find a faster and cheap taxi to get home. It turned out that a bus was full of passengers but I was chatting with a few of them. I told that it was unsafe to be waiting for in the street to catch a taxi at midnight. One of the woman in the bus said that her car was parked near the station. So she offered me a ride to my home, drop me safely and did not accept a penny in return. I was so thankful for his kindness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To make our life colorful, my classmates and I took part in a picking activity on a farm lie in the suburb of our city on last Sunday. When we arrived, we were all deep attracted by that we saw. Lovely fruits, such as peaches and cherries, hang on the green branch, which made us really excited. As soon as they were divided into small groups, we worked separately. As time passed by, the activity came to end and all of us gained various fresh and tasty fruits. Tired although I was, I found it worthwhile and get close to nature could benefit us a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember the day when I soon had to be faced for difficult exams. Sadly, I failed the practice test just the day before. I was in a terrible state, feeling hopeless but tired. Wandering around the campus, I saw masses of leaves of a ginkgo tree, forced me to forget about the exams and admire the naturally beauty. All of them, not one less, was shining together in the rising sun. I thought of me as a single leaf among others. When life seems hardly, there are many who stand with you. All what you need is to find your way out of those negative emotion and have a look around.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
This morning I went to my favorite restaurant for breakfast as usually. Touched by an elderly couple next to me, so I offered to pay for them. Knowing their request, the owner there told me one of her unforgettable day. It was a cold morning that she went with her baby to the store. Her baby was screaming and crying, and she said sorry to all the other people try to shop in peace. Then, when she got the bill, she realized that someone else have paid for it. It touched her so much that it brings her to tears. After she saw me doing this, it reminded her that moment which meant so much to her.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream is to become a biologist who studies life in the ocean. I wish to spend my time at sea, admire sea life, doing research on them and then protecting the awesome life. To realize my dream, I must to work very hard academic and physically. Firstly, I need to gain as much knowledges as possible. Beside, I must start exercising more both in strengthening my muscles or improving my heart and lung capabilities. To be a skill swimmer and diver will qualify me for my work in a field. Though the preparations are tough, I am sure my success.