增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Technology is everywhere, affecting almost every aspect of our life. So it is no doubt that technology had become an important part of our daily life. But it is actually a double-edged sword.
Taking the Internet for example. For one thing, the Internet makes our study more convenient, what definitely improves our learning efficiency. For another, it provides us with an excellent opportunity to broaden our horizon. However, it can sometimes do harm to our health, especially our eyes, unless we overuse it.
As a result, when it comes to technology, we should look it objectively and reasonable. We should make the full use of the Internet and meanwhile, protect yourselves from its potential harm.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My cousin Tom was getting married the day after tomorrow. In order leave early tomorrow to help him with the wedding ceremony, I worked overtime today to finish edit the report in advance. When everything was settled, it was almost 11 p. m. The street was dark and there was no vehicle in my sight, let alone a taxi. To make matter worse, my phone was dead but I couldn’t get a ride on Uber. I was shaking with cold in this freezing December night, feeling helpless, while a delivery man approached me. Having known what had happened, he voluntary gave me a lift home, on his motorbike. How an unforgettable experience!
Last week, a group of international students paid visit to our school to learn about our tea-drinking culture. They were taken to the tea room in our school which I introduced the history of tea making and different kind of tea. Then I showed them what to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while make tea. All of them were amazing and couldn’t wait to have a try. Soon the tea room became live with everyone trying to make our own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing but enjoying the tea.
In the end, we took in a group photo to record this unforgettable experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m so honored to serving as your guide to a local restaurant which you can taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant well known to many people. It has high quality dish as well as top service. A traditional and special soup dumplings are its specialty, which I did believe you will like. In the way, it’s convenient to get to there by bus. We’ll meet at the bus stop near us school at 10 o’clock this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will direct take us there.
Wish you a good time.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandmother is born on a farm in California. At 18, she left home and worked as a house keeper in a painter’s house until she married with my grandfather at 27. A couple farmed for most of their lives, first in Virginia and then in New York. In my grandmother’s late seventy, she made a decision learn to paint. She said she just wanted to keep busily, though she had had that dream since she first saw his former employer paint. A few years later, her hard work finally paid for. Her pictures were first selling at a local market and were soon noticed by a businessman, that bought everything she painted.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意: (1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember my thirteen birthday celebration. Instead of the usually parties, my parents decided to spend the whole day with myself. They took me to a larger bookshop first, in which I spent a long time looking through books and magazines there before selecting those I wanted. Then, we went to the cinema. There were many different movies to watch. We finally choose Fantastic 4. My face lit up when I saw the comfortable seats or the huge screen as well. That was one of the most memorable birthday I had ever had. Although I didn’t have a cake or my friends celebrate it, I was pleasant to do which I wanted that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my friends and I decided to go to skiing together. As we arrived, we could see the slopes cover in a blanket of white, which waited for us to overcoming them. We eager rented our skis and snowboards and made our way to the beginner’s slope. Some of us were experiencing skiers, when others were trying it for the first time. We encouraged each other but shared tips on how to manage the slopes. As we slid down hill, a sense of joy filled the air. We challenged us to tackle more challenging runs. Skiing together not only allowed us to enjoy the thrill of the sport but strengthen our friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jimmy. I’m writing to recommend me as a candidate for the chairman of the English drama club. Equipping with fluent English and a good knowledge of drama, I have no difficulty communicating with others in English. I know exact what is expected of a leader of the club but I’m experienced in cooperating. In addition of, I’ve been working in student organizations for while, so I’m quite familiar to the daily routines. Last but not least, I’m enthusiastic about drama and eager to take responsibility for a reliable chairman, contributing to the prosper of English drama. Should I have the opportunity to serve the club, I will lead it to the best of my ability.
9 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email, from that I can feel your greatly interest in the mascots for the 2022 Winter Olympic and Paralympic Games—Bing Dwen Dwen and Shuey Rhon Rhon.
As for all the message that they convey, please allow me give a brief introduction. Bing Dwen Dwen looks like as a giant panda. It also resembles a astronaut, which is a nod to our astronauts’ selfless devote and their exploration of space.
The image of Shuey Rhon Rhon are a combination of snow and a lantern in the color of Chinese red. Not only does it imply tolerance, harvest, warmth, but they also represents friendship, courage and strength, reflects the fighting spirit of the Winter Paralympic athletes.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Looking back on my senior school life, I have so many things to share them with you. I still remember I step into my high school with high expectations. Therefore, I felt so frustrated after the first month test. I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student. With the helps of friendly classmates and teachers, I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to my study, thus do well in some academic performances. Besides, I took active part in colorful after-school activities, on which I benefited a lot. In a word, I am now satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
