After he married with Portia, Henry had bad luck in business, but he was very upset all day long. Portia felt very puzzling and wanted to know what was matter with him. Having known that had happened to him, Portia looked so calm but tried to comfort him. And meanwhile, she encouraged him to overcome the trouble she met with and wanted to wait for Henry to make some more money, what made him very happy.
Portia’s actions made Henry so confident for himself that he promised that he would work twice as hard as he could to earn a lot of money because he loved her so much and hoped Portia will live a better life.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other on the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they email each other by the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Born in America，Thomas Edison was a great scientist and an inventor.He was once thought to be a boy whom was not worth educating.In fact，he was a man full of imaginations.
I admire Edison a lot because his great contributions to the world.He is said to having more than 1，000 inventions.In his lifetime, he were always eager to know how things worked.He was also very diligent and work day and night.And this explained why he had so much great inventions.
Success can never be easy achieved.Probably I can't be another Edison himself, but I will work hard to be a worthy person.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone! I would like to share my travel experience for you. Last summer, ours school had an exchange programme with an American school, but I took part in it with many classmates. We stay at host families, that gave us an opportunity to learn more about America. The main part of our programme was to experience the school life in the America. Compare with Chinese students, American students were very open and active. Besides, they had less homeworks and fewer exams. During the visit, I made friends with some American students, who were very interesting in Chinese culture. I think the programme is of great benefit to us as well the American students.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. Usual, I am afraid of taking a bus. The awful smell of the bus drives me mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I could defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend I ever liked him, but all of us were so busy with examinations at high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised when I received his call that I could hardly believe my ears. At first, I think we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him for giving me a happy day!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Robben Island was a frightened place where Elias spent a hardest four years of his life. There Nelson Mandela begins a school for many prisoner and even the guards. Elias learned such hard that after he finished the four years in prison, he found a job in an office because of he was better educated. However, he lose the job soon because the police told his boss that he has been in prison for blowing up government buildings. Lucky for him, when Nelson Mandela came power, he gave him a job showing tourists around the old prison on Robben Island.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Although it was autumn, but the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet. Along the way children who was dressed in long wool coats stop to look at us. The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderfully. To climb the mountains was hard work but as we found myself cycling through clouds, we were surprising. It was great fun to go down the mountains. In the valleys colourful butterflies fly around us and we saw many sheeps eating green grass.
At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. We can hardly wait reach Dali in Yunnan Province, there our cousins will join us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometimes 1 feel that living in a city makes people lonely than before. People always feel strangers cannot trusted. They think this is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at anyone. I desire to change that. Last week, while I was skate, a man ran by, smiling at me. He said something to me about doing sports or he hoped to be able to finishing his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And then a family cycles by when I was in the park. One of the girl waved at me with a big smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I do believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.
I'd like tell you something about your life in this boarding school. I stay in a dormitory with three other girls, all of them are kind and nice. We get on well with each other and have become good friends. Living in a boarding school make me independent. I am confidence to take care of myself, wash the clothes, and clean the rooms, which I never do when at home. The classes here are very interesting and challenging, and I'm still feeling a little dissatisfied with some other thing. The living conditions are not as good as those at home and the chance to get in the touch with the outside world is limited. Anyway, I'll get used to live here and hope everything will be better soon.
Planning is good as it decides in details how we do what we want to do it. However, a plan bear no fruit without being actual carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last month is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours work out a schedule with my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practicing in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally stood out among the rest as a first prize winner. I know why I achieved my success. It came from good planning but better practice.
