增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward to relax myself. I’d like to go swimming, climb mountains and saw several movies. I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the summer holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fall off a tree, or fight about others. Besides, they are worried that I may lose my ways. I really hate being treated like a bird kept in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am Liu Ying, a high school student. Our school is built 50 years ago. It is very beautifully as you can find many of tall trees, flowers and green grass here. I am very proud of learn in such a school. However, it’s a pity that there is a lot of rubbishes at some corners. I think we can do anything. First, we must know the important of keeping the school clean. Beside, we should spend some time clean up every corner of the school every day. Last, we must remember that no matter where we find rubbish, it is our duty pick it up and put it into rubbish cans.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to Ningxia University to visit my brother in last June. After lunch, he said what he would bring me to the playground but didn’t tell me why. When we arrived there, to my greatly surprise, the playground was like a bigger book market. I was curious about it. My brother told me some students who would graduate soon was selling their old books. My brother chose several books he was interested. See that my brother loved the book so much, the students decided to give them to him for free. In my opinion, it is really the good way to make full use about old books.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该填加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I got up early and hurry to school to take an exam. It was an important exam and I felt like quite nervous. Just a few minute before the exam, I suddenly found that I forgot to bring my ruler. It was a math test but the ruler would be using to draw lines. I turned many students for help. But to my sad, all of them didn’t have the extra ruler. Just when I was worried about what to solve the problem, one student nearby broke his ruler into two parts. He handed me one generously and I was so gratefully to him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year I moved to a new city with my parents. It is the first time that I had come to the city. Being a student in ordinary school, I felt disappointing at the poor campus and the classroom. But with time going by, I found the teachers patient but helpful. In addition to, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. So I made up my mind to making use of it. I studied hardly with the help of my teachers and classmates. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly increased my confidence. Our experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determine who you are.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jane. I want be a journalist. Journalists have to be very independently, and they need many different skill. They especially need to communicate well with people, what I believe I’m good at. Also I liked travelling and doing challenging things. I think work for a newspaper and reporting from all over the world are really exciting. My parents think being a journalist is the dangerous job, but I’m not scared of. I like taking risks. I know I won’t make many money and bringing news to people around the world will be enough.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, our family drive twenty miles to a beach with my dog, Prince, which stomach seems to be always crying out for food, to have a picnic. Soon after arriving, I said, “Let’s to eat the sandwiches. Prince and me are hungry. ” “Not right now. Swim first. ” my parents said. They placed the picnic basket in the shore, with a towel covering the food. We had much funs in the cool water. But a short while late, screams came from my mom. Rushing out the water, I saw Prince licking his lips. I bet whether he wasn’t hungry anymore. And everyone else was.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On our way home yesterday, one of my close friends was feeling a bit low because of she had a really bad day. I tried many way to cheer her up, but anything worked. I was worried on her. Whenever we were nearly home, I found that the trees along the road was in beautiful fall colors and the sun was shining. So I point it out to her. See that, she started to get happy and enjoy the colors. She took pictures of the yellow leaves and was all smiles final. This was a good lesson showing that nature is always there comfort and encourage us.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改只限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I got extreme excited about my online graduation when I received the email from my school. The school has created a special website for the graduation and a number of activity to make us involved and amused. In the morning of July 15, I woke up early and entered the website for the graduation ceremony. First, the school president gave a speech so as congratulate the graduates. Then, we watch the video messages from our family members and teachers instead of sit through several talks. Finally, we shared memories and promised to keep in the touch in the future. How an informal but meaningful ceremony! We all were delight with it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday morning, I go to the park with Tim. There was many people there. I found a boy which was crying in the park. He was losing and he couldn't find his father. We decided to help him. Tim tried my best to find the broadcasting station in the park. At the same times, I played with the boy and took good care him there. The little boy stopped cry and played with me. The anxious father final arrived. I felt very happy and thought we did a good thing. If everyone helps each other, and the world will become much more beautiful.